HI EVERYONE!!! WE ARE TALKING ABOUT CARNIVAL!!!HAVE A LOOK AT MY POST AND TRY TO WRITE A SIMILAR ONE ABOUT YOUR CARNIVAL EXPERIENCE!!! USE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS LEARNED IN CLASS!!!
Yesterday I was at Notting Hill Carnival!!! It was fantastic!!! There was a crowd and there were lots of people taking photos with their mobile phones.
People were having lots of fun!!! There was a colourful float made of flowers and there were beautiful fireworks in the sky.
There wasn't a stage with dancers or musicians but there was a big parade.
There was a band playing instruments and there were lots of amazing costumes all around. There were some food stalls with hot dogs and burgers, but there weren't any food stalls for noodles or muffins.
THE LAST DAY IS FRIDAY 27TH JANUARY!!!
BRILLIANT MARIA!!! THAT'S PERFECT!!!THANKS:)
ResponderEliminarREPEAT JOEL FOLLOWING MY INSTRUCTIONS AND USING THE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS YOU KNOW FROM UNIT 3!!!
ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose!! Yesterday Last week I went to a carnival festival! It was very happy there were a lot of people on the street, there were some beautiful fireworks. There was a amazing band! There were some flowery costumes but there weren't any masks. There were some delicious food. My costume was a Avatar!! and we won the second prize in a restaurante. We had a great time By Marcos Diaz 5thB!
ResponderEliminarYESTEDAY OR LAST WEEK??? I WAS VERY HAPPY... THESE ARE THE TWO MISTAKES IN YOUR WRITING, THE REST IS AMAZING!!! THANKS MARCOS!!!
EliminarThanks Maria Jose
EliminarHello!!Maria Jose.There was a lots of big floats but there wasn´t any food stall.There were some big and colorfulls fireworks.There weren´t any masks but there were lots of people colorfuls balons.There weren´t any bigs stages but there were some smalls stages.Good bye
ResponderEliminarYOU MEAN THERE WERE LOTS OF FLOATS (PLURAL) BUT THERE WEREN'T ANY FOOD STALLS (PLURAL) YOU CONFUSE SINGULAR WITH PLURAL AND THIS IS SOMETHING YOU CAN DO RIGHT NOW!!! IT'S OK BUT I PREFER IF YOU REPEAT YOUR TEXT DOING IT PERFECTLY!!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose! Yesterday .I went to a carnival festival! There were some flowery floats .There was a noisy band but there weren't any colorful drums .There were lots of beautiful costumes.There were some colorful masks.There were some fireworks on the sky, it's verry beautiful.There were some foot stals.There were some noodels,pizza and lots of thing.My costume is a dolphin.Bye Maria Jose 🎭☺️
ResponderEliminarAMAZING ARLET!!! YOUR WRITING IS PERFECT!!! THANKS!!!
EliminarThanks Maria Jose😁
EliminarHello Maria Jose! Yesterday, I went to a carnival festival!! There were some spotty floats, parades and massive crowds waiting for the people with cool costumes coming by. There also was tons of food stalls what sold hot dogs and cheese burgers! There were some very beautiful colorful fireworks. There was a band what was playing my favourite song. My costume for the carnival festival was a lion. Bye bye Maria Jose. -Tyler Balsys 5B
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT TYLER!!! IT'S AMAZING!! THANKS!!!
EliminarHi Maria José!! The Last week i go to my Grandparents house, and i look a perfect and New costume for this carnival , in the carnival I look FOUR COLORFULL FLOATS, and the food stalls are to : Cotton candy, pizza and hot dogs. There was'nt a band and there was'nt a fireworks. Oh!! And my costume is a penguin🐧. Bye Maria José 😊
ResponderEliminarYOU MEAN I WENT...AND IN THE POST YOU DON'T DESCRIBE SENTENCES USING GRAMMAR FORMULAS LEARNED IN THE CLASS!!! YOU SHOULD REPEAT IT WHEN YOU CAN!!! THANKS!!!
EliminarSorry for the late maria José here is the repetition :
EliminarHi Maria José!! The Last week i go to my Grandparents house, and i look a perfect and New costume for this carnival , in the carnival you mean I look FOUR COLORFULL FLOATS, and the food stalls are to : Cotton candy, pizza and hot dogs. I went to go at the food stalls, the food are perfect, sweet, all the good things and the band... there was'nt a band and there was'nt fireworks. Oh!! And my costume is a penguin. Bye Maria José
Nira 5ºb
Hello Maria Jose!!! Yesterday,I went to a carnival! there were some colorful floats and there were drums.the costumes were butterfly,they were beautiful, people throw a lot of candies there were some food stalls.Bye bye!!!
ResponderEliminarSHORT BUT NICE!!! YOU MEAN THE COSTUMES WERE BUTTERFLIES (IN PLURAL)... THANKS!!! ARE YOU MARIA OR NURIA??? REMIND TO WRITE YOUR NAME WHEN YOU FINISH AND THE CLASS!!!
EliminarI'am Maria
EliminarHello Maria José!!! Yesterday,I went to a carnival and my friends!!! there were some costumes but there waren´t any fireworks.The peoples throwing the oranges, they were great.We went to food stage the. I love the carnival. Bye Maria José
ResponderEliminarAT THE END IS A BIT CONFUSING BUT THE POST IS NICE, WHO ARE YOU?? MARIA OR NURIA???
EliminarIm Nuria
EliminarHello Maria Jose!!! Yesterday,I went to a carnival with my family and my friends!!!
ResponderEliminarThere was a float and there were some fireworks but there wasn't food stall.
My costume it was a police It's great.
I love the carnival.
Bye,Joel Soler 5thA
THANKS JOEL, IT'S GREAT NOW!!! LOVE IT!!!
EliminarHi Maria jose!!The other day i went a the carnaval with my parents.There was a big food stall.The food was delicious!!There were colorfuls costumes,but there wasn't a esponje bob costume.There weren't fireworks.The carnival was so much fun
ResponderEliminarGREAT POST!!! WHO ARE YOU SARA??? IS IT ANGELA???
EliminarHi Maria Jose!!! Yesterday, I went to a carnival with my family and my friends.
ResponderEliminarIt was fantastic!!!
There was a food stall but there were some crowds.
There were some fireworks in the sky.
There wasn't a monkey costume.There wasn't a stage with dancers or musicians but there was a big parade.
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by Aroa 5A
BRILLIANT AROA!! I LOVE YOUR POST AND YOUR CARNIVAL EXPERIENCE!!! THANKS!!!
EliminarHi M.Jose!!!
ResponderEliminarYesterday I was a Valencia carniva!!!
There was a big bandon the parade.
Int the parade,there were lots of beatiful floats
There wasn't any food stalls.
In the afternon there were lots of noisy fireworks in the sky!!!!
BY ANGEL5THA
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EliminarYOU MEAN THERE WEREN'T ANY FOOD STALLS... BE CAREFUL WITH THESE MISTAKES!!! THE POST IS VERY NICE, THANKS!!!
EliminarHi M.Jose!!
ResponderEliminarYesterday I went with my family to the carnival of Vinaros.
There were some colourful fireworks. After this there was a band with some drums.
At the end of the night I was hungry but there wasn´t a food stall.
By Javier 5thB
SHORT BUT INTENSE!!! THE WRITING IS FINE ALTHOUGH YOU COULD WRITE SOMETHING ELSE AS IT IS A BIT SHORT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose!!!
ResponderEliminarYesterday, i went to a carnival!!! There was a float, there was a stage and a lot of people making video and taking photos there were some food stall and the people is diguised , there was a band, the band it's very funny because i like rhythm and the melody makes me feel happy but i don't like floats and
I HOPE YOU HAVE A HAPPY CARNIVAL!!!! A greeting GONZALO!!
THANKS GONZALO!!! LOVE YOUR POST!!!IT'S GREAT!!!:)
EliminarHi Maria Jose!! Yesterday I went to a Venice carnival!!.
ResponderEliminarThere was a flowery and colourful float .
There were some very noisy bands.
There wasn't a parade and stage.
There was a food stall whats hot dogs.
There wasn't a fireworks .BY JUDITH 5THB
YOU MEAN A PARADE OR A STAGE... AND THERE WEREN'T ANY FIREWORKS...BE CAREFUL WITH THIS KIND OF MISTAKES, THANKS FOR COMMENT JUDITH, IT'S VERY NICE!!!
EliminarHi mariajose, i went to canival with my friends last wek
ResponderEliminarwekthere were some beautiful masks but there weren't any costumes
and there was a big and colourfol floats, there wan't food stall but there were colourfol fireworks ,and noisy band.
my friends last last weekby mariajose.CLAUDIA5thA
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EliminarGREAT CLAUDIA, SOMETIMES IT'S A BIT CONFUSING BECAUSE OF SOME MISTAKES IN WRITING BUT IT'S FINE!!! THANKS!!!
EliminarHello Maria José.
ResponderEliminarLast year I went to de Canary Islands Carnival with mi parents.
There were some colourful floats, but there weren't any fireworks.
I saw a lots of parades of people in costumes but I wasn't in costumes.
There were a lots of bands but there weren't flutes.
It was a lots of fun. I had a great time.
By AINARA 5B
GREAT AINARA!! BRILLIANT POST!!! LOVE IT!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose !!!yesterday I went to a London carnival.
ResponderEliminarThere were some colorful and amazing cosmtumes but there was a big stage, there were lots of colorful and sparkly floats and there
was a big parade, there weren't any feathers masks but there were sparkly masks , there was fantastic fireworks and there a noisy band, there was a big crowd.Bye bye Maria Jose
ANDREA5thB
AWESOME ANDREA!!! LOVE IT!!! THANKS!!!
EliminarThanks Maria Jose
EliminarHi!!!!
ResponderEliminarLast month I was at France Carnival!!!
It was fantastic!!
There was a band in the street. The music was fantastic!
There were lots of people wearing costumes. They were colourful.
Children were having lots of fun!
There were some beautiful fireworks in the sky and people were taking photos.
There weren't any floats but there was a big stage with dancers.
There were lots of food stalls. You can eat hamburger, pizza or shushi.
People dance in the street and enjoy very much.
I love the carnival!!!
BRILLIANT MARTA!! I LOVE YOUR POST!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!:)
EliminarThank you very much!!
EliminarHello María José! Yesterday, I went to a Carnaval in Atlanta,It's beautiful! There were some amaizing fireworks in the Sky but there weren't any sweets. There was a float made of flowers and a Big parade when the peapol wearing costums and masks, this carnaval make me feel very Happy! Bye María José
ResponderEliminarCarla 5thA😘
LOVE IT CARLA!!! AMAZING POST!! THANKS!!!
EliminarHello Maria José!!! The last week, i went to Rio de Janeiro carnival. There were some noisy drums, but there weren't any fireworks. There was a big parade. In the parade, there were some amazing costumes and sparkly masks but there wasn't a food stall. And there wasn't stage but there were some colorful floats. By Martin5B-_-
ResponderEliminarGREAT MARTIN!! AMAZING POST!! THANKS!!!!
EliminarThank you, 👍👍
EliminarHello Maria José!!!The last week i wen't to New York crnival. There was a fantastic band but there waren't any acrobats. There was a big float and there were noisy, colorful and beautiful fireworks.
ResponderEliminarThere was a Hot dog food stall but there wasn't any noodkes food stall. There were some flowery and beautiful costumes, there were colorful and funny masks and there were bery Good dancers
Y love this carnival
By SOFIA 5thB
BRILLIANT SOFIA!!! WELL DONE!!!:)
EliminarHello Maria jose i would like to tell you abaut the carnival there are very funny bands and others don't but above all the ones i like are those who deress up invery funi costums
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