jueves, 3 de marzo de 2022

WHAT DID YOU DO YESTERDAY??? WRITE A POST (5TH PRIMARY)

IN UNIT 5 WE ARE TALKING ABOUT PAST ACTIONS USING THE PAST SIMPLE FORM!!!

TELL ME IN A POST ACTIONS YOU DID YESTERDAY WHEN YOU ARRIVED HOME!!! HERE YOU HAVE WHAT I DID!!! COME ON!!!

THE LAST DAY IS WEDNESDAY 9TH MARCH!!!

After school I arrived home at five o'clock and then I had a snack at half past five. I went for a walk at six o'clock and then I drank a coffee. Later I used the internet for an hour and I discovered interesting news on the digital newspaper. I checked all my emails and blog posts and I read some messages. I watched TV for thirty minutes but I didn't listen to music or play computer games. Finally I had dinner at half past nine, I  wrote some whatsapps and I went to bed at a quarter past ten. I was very tired!!!




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  1. After school I arrived home at half past five and then i do homework.I study so hard at six o'clock and then i have a shower.
    Later I used the internet for 1 hour and read manga.I checked the blog for homework.I watched TV for 1 hour but i didn't listen to music or play table games.Finally i had dinner at half past eight,I read manga and I went to bed at a half past nine. And this is my post!

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    1. SO YOU STUDIED HARD AND YOU DID YOUR HOMEWORK!!! THESE TWO FORMULAS WERE IN PRESENT AND YOU HAVE TO USE THEM IN PAST AS THEY ARE ACTIONS YOU DID YESTERDAY!!! THE REST IS EXCELLENT, WELL DONE!!!:)

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    2. Ok María José, I will take it into account :D

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  2. after school on Tuesday I get ready to go to the English academy from 5:30 to 6:30 and from 6:30 to 7:30 I go to karate i when I get home [I had already finished my homework at school] I start studying [review not studying] i finally shower ceno I brush my teeth and I go to bed FIN ByVincent

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    1. Hello Maria Jose I hope to do well

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    2. HI VINCENT!!! YOU HAVE TO REPEAT YOUR POST AS MANY ACTIONS ARE IN PRESENT SIMPLE AND YOU HAVE TO WRITE THEM IN PAST!!! WRITE SIMPLE SENTENCES AND DON'T COMPLICATE WRITING GRAMMAR FORMULAS YOU DON'T KNOW YET!!! REPEAT!!!

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  3. IN THE AFTERNOON after leaving school I walked to enter the house I did my homework and eat snaks then I saw on television my favorite program the mandalorian and played after I had dinner finally brushed my teeth. BY ANGIE

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    1. IT'S GOOD ANGIE ALTHOUGH THERE ARE SOME GRAMMAR MISTAKES BUT IN GENERAL IS FINE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)

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  4. Hello Maria Jose.
    Yesterday affter school I got home at a quarter to five .I had a snack with milk and cookies .I did my homework and studied for the natural sciences exam. Later at half past seven o'clock,I went to karate class.
    I went home ,had dinner and finally went to bed half past ten .

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    1. BRILLIANT!!! NICE COMMENT ALTHOUGH YOU FORGET TO WRITE "I" AS A SUBJECT, IT'S COMPLETELY NECESSARY!!! ANYWAY, YOUR POST IS FINE!! THANKS FOR COMMENT:)

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  5. Hello Mª Jose
    Yesterday affter school I go to the Masymas and i bought some few things
    incluiding some paprika Pringles.When I was going to Masymas I was wearing some anti-noise firecrackers in my ears because I hate firecrackers they scare me
    a lot. When arrived home I started to study the exam I had today .Late y go to the bathroom and I took a hot shower. At halp past nine i ate dinner.

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    1. SO YOU WENT TO MASYMAS AND LATER YOU WENT TO THE BATHROOM, REMEMBER THAT THE PAST OF THE VERB GO IS WENT, VERY IMPORTANT!!! THE COMMENT IS SO NICE, GREAT!! THANKS YOU!!!

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  6. Hello Mª Jose!
    Yesterday after school , I was to home's Sofia, then Sofia ,Sofia's mum and me we go to Padel with TERESA,SOFIA and ALBA it was very funny .Later of Padel i go to my cousin's home and im watched a film ,then I arrive home at 19:00 .Im got at shower finally I dinner with my family and I go to bed at 22:30

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    1. THERE ARE LOTS OF MISTAKES IN YOUR WRITING AS LOTS OF VERBS ARE NOT IN PAST SIMPLE. DINNER GOES WITH ONE VERB THAT IT'S NOT IN YOUR WRITING, PLEASE REPEAT IT FOLLOWING MY INSTRUCTIONS!!! THANKS!!!

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  7. Hello Maria Jose
    Yesterday after school i went home then at half past two i went to rollerskates class after rollerskates class i went to the candy shop to bougth some candy later i went to my house.I had a hot shower and finally watch some movies until half past eleven .I didn´t do yoga or play computer games.
    BY CARLOTA 5thA

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    1. SO YOU FINALLY WATCHED SOME MOVIES, I LIKE YOUR POST CARLOTA, IT'S NICE, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!

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  8. Yesterdat,after school I went to the library whith my cousins.When I arrived home at six o'clock and I had a snack whith apple.Later I did my homework whith my sister at half past six.At half past seven I had a shower and I watched TV for thirty minutes.And finaly I had dinner at half past eigth and then I go to bed at nine o'clock.


    By Valeria.S 5thB✨

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    1. YOUR POST IS FANTASTIC VALERIA ALTHOUGH I ASKED YOU TO WRITE SOME ACTIONS IN NEGATIVE AS ROUTINES YOU DIDN'T DO YESTERDAY. ANYWAY, YOUR COMMENT IS FINE, THANKS!!! :)

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  9. Hello Maria Jose
    Yesterday afternoon I went to drawing classes with María and Sandra.I started to draw a picture of butterflies and then I painted it.
    When the class finished I went to the park with them.We pulled off firecrackers and we met classmates.
    Then I went home for dinner with my parents and after thar, we saw the final of TuCaraMeSuena.


    By Paula 5Thb🤍🤙

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    1. BRILLIANT POST PAULA, IT'S PERFECT. THE ONLY THING IS THAT YOU DON'T WRITE ANY ACTION YOU DIDN'T DO YERSTERDAY BUT IT'S OK, THANK FOR COMMENT :)

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  10. Hello María José yesterday wen i arrived i maked all my homework ,i study 2 hours Maths,i maked muy routine of exercise.I didn't go to te park,i didn't watch TV etc...
    Later i usted internet for 3 hours i have de diner and i went to the ned

    By Ivan5B

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    1. YOUR POST IS GRAMMATICALLY INCORRECT IVAN BECAUSE YOU WRITE IN A HURRY AND YOU DON'T PAY ATTENTION. YOU HAVE TO TELL ME ABOUT YOUR DAY YESTERDAY IN PAST!!! AND HOMEWORK GOES WITH "DO" NOT WITH "MAKE". REPEAT IT!!!

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    2. Hello María José yesterday after school i arrived home at half past five ,later i did all my homework,after this i studied for 3 hours Maths,later i maked my exercise routine.
      I didn't watch TV,i didn't went to the park.
      Later i usted the internet 4 hours, later i has de diner and i went to the bed

      By Ivan5B

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    3. GREAT IVAN!!! SO YOU DID YOUR EXERCISE ROUTINE!!! YOUR POST NOW IS BRILLIANT AND GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT!!! NICE COMMENT!!!:)

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  11. Hello MªJosé:
    Yerterday, after school I arrived home at a quarter to five, then I had a snack at five o'clock and I did my homework. Later, I played with my brother. At eight o'clock I had a shower and I had dinner. Finally I went to bed at ten o'clock.

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    1. IT'S OK BUT I WAS LOOKING FOR MORE, I NEED MORE INFORMATION, THE USE OF MORE VERBS, SOME SENTENCES IN NEGATIVE THAT YOU DON'T WRITE IN THIS POST...REPEAT IT!!!

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  12. Hello Maria Jose!!!Yesterday when I arrived home after school I did my homework.Later I watched TV with my brother.Then I had a snack and I went to my ballet class.After the class I arrived home and I had a shower.Later,my grandparents arrived home and we had dinner.After dinner we watch a film.Finally I brushed my teeth and I went to bed.
    I didn't go to the supermarket or ride my bike.
    BY Maria.

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    1. YOUR POST IS BRILLIANT AND PERFECT MARIA, I LOVE IT!!! GRAMAMATICALLY AMAZING WITH THE APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY, THANKS SO MUCH FOR PAYING ATTENTION AND BE GREAT!!! :)

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    2. Hello Maria Jose.
      Thanks.
      By Maria 5thA.

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  13. HELLO MªJose: Yesterday, after school I played at park with my friends until quarter past five. When I arrived home I did my homework. Then I watched youtube in the TV. After I went to karate and when I finished I went to my home. Later, in my home I had dinner and watch TV. Finally I was so tired and I went to sleep.

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    1. FANTASTIC LUCAS, GREAT POST!!! I MISS SOME NEGATIVE STATEMENTS BUT IN GENERAL IS BRILLIANT, THANKS!!! :)

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  14. Yesterday, after school, I arrived at five. I ate two chocolate donuts for snack and then I put my basketball luggage and I went to practice.
    At half past six I finished training, I went home and I took a shower. When I finished, I watched TV for 1 hour. At half past eight I had dinner, I didn't play on the computer or board games ,but I did my homework. I finally brushed my teeth and I went to sleep.
    By Marcos 5thA

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    1. SO BRILLIANT AND PERFECT, THE GRAMMAR AND THE VOCABULARY IS JUST AMAZING AND THE WAY YOU WRITE AS WELL, THANKS FOR SUCH AN AMAZING POST MARCOS!!! :)

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  15. Yesterday Saturday afternoon, I played video games for 1 hour, afther I went with my friends to shoot firecrackers, it was a lot of fun.
    Afther I had an ice cream with my parents.
    Then when I got home I studied for exams and did my homework, then I watched TV for 1 hour and went to bed.

    By Eric 5thA

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    1. FANTASTIC ERIK, NICE POST BUT REMEMBER YOU CAN'T WRITE "AFTER" ALONE, IT HAS TO BE AFTER THAT OR LATER OR THEN, BUT NEVER JUST "AFTER" BECAUSE IT'S INCORRECT. THE REST IS FINE, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!:)

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  16. hello MªJose
    Yesterday affter school I was to my home and my mom Maria.Late I go to swiming and my club friends,I love swim.I arrive home at 8:30,late I did homework,I dinner at 9:00 I love PIZZA and finally I go to bed at 10:00.

    BY:ELENA 5thA

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    1. THERE ARE LOTS OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES AS YOU DON'T USE IN SOME CASES THE PAST SIMPLE. REPEAT IT!!!

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    2. hello MªJose
      yesterday after school I went home and my mom Maria.Late I went to swiming and my club friends,I arrived home at 8:30,late I did homework,I dinner at 9:00 I loved PIZZA, and finally I went to bed at 10:00.


      BY:ELENA 5thA

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    3. THANKS ELENA!!! IT'S FINE NOW!!! THANKS TO REPEAT IT!!! :)

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  17. Hello Maria Jose

    Yesterday, I arrived home from the school at quarter to five. Then, at five to five, I had a snack on a banana and some cookies. After, at half past five, I played football with my friend Francisco. Later, I went home at quarter past seven and I had a shower. Then, I did my homework and I had dinner at nine o'clock. Finally, I brushed my teeth and I went to bed at ten o'clock. During the week, couldn't play video games and I didn't watch videos on my tablet.

    By Adrian 5thB

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    1. BRILLIANT ADRIAN!!!! SO FANTASTIC AND NICE!!! JUST ONE THING!! "AFTER" NEVER GOES ALONE, IF YOU WANT TO USE AFTER IT HAS TO BE AFTER THAT OR USE OTHER VOCABULARY AS LATER OR THEN, OK??? THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  18. Hi Maria Jose,

    -The first thing I did was go to see the Albal cavalcade, because my best friend, María, was going. When the cavalcade was over, I went with María to change into her house and to remove her makeup. Then we went to the Carambolas, to buy firecrackers. Some of my class were in the park. When we finished firecrackers we went to dinner, the food was great. We finished dinner at 11:15 p.m. and left at 12:45 a.m. When I got home I put on my pijama and went to sleep.

    By Sandra����

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    1. FANTASTIC WITH A NICE AND CHALLENGING USE OF GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY UP TO THE NORMAL LEVEL, THAT'S SO AMAZING SANDRA!!! LOVE YOUR POST, THANKS FOR COMMENT:)

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  19. Hello Maria José,

    Yesteday I want to saw a cavalcade in Albal. Beacause María paraded with her fault. First she passed in front of Mercadona before María went through the town hall, a fault happened that they went from "La Casa de Papel" they started throwing counterfeit bills and sandra and I started taking them all. then maria passed by and the three of us went to dinner. We play until 12:45 in the morning


    By Celia

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    1. SO YOU PLAYED UNTIL VERY LATE AT NIGHT!! THAT'S SO NICE CELIA, I'M SURE YOU HAD A GOOD EXPERIENCE AND A FANTASTIC AFTERNOON, GREAT POST!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  21. Hi Mariajose,
    Yesterday I played a soccer game at 9 in the morning. I had lunch with my colleagues at eleven o'clock in the morning, and I went to see my uncles.
    In the afternoon I had a party in my "falla".
    I was all afternoon with my friends dancing and playing.
    I finally had dinner at 10 o'clock at night, watched TV for a while and went to sleep.
    It was a funny day.
    By Ximo nieto 5thB

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    1. FANTASTIC POST XIMO!!! I LOVE IT AND WHAT YOU DID AS WELL!!! NICE USE OF GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY, GREAT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)

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  22. after school i arrived home at six o'clock. as son as i arrived i start to finish the homework that i haven't finished before after that when i finish i start to play whit the tablet for a while in a cardboard box for fun.Then i start to play whit my toys.In the end,since i have a lot of fun, my mother calls me for dinner and after that i feed my fish and my invisible dog.

    RUBEN </3 5ºB

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    1. YOUR POST IS VERY COMPLICATED AS YOU USE LOTS OF INFORMATION INSTEAD OF CONCRETE SENTENCES. IN THIS WAY YOU FORGET TO WRITE IN PAST SIMPLE AND THERE ARE LOTS OF MISTAKES. DON'T COMPLICATE YOURSELF AND WRITE SHORT AND MEANINGFUL SENTENCES IN AFFIRMATIVE AND NEGATIVE WITH YOUR OWN WORDS AND THE VOCABULARY LEARNED IN CLASS. REPEAT IT!!!

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  23. Hello MJosé
    After school I arived home at half past two and I usted tne Internet for one hour. Later I went to the shopping center with my parents then, we go to the "Bauhaus"and had lot of flowers.We didn't went to the "el corte inglés " .Finally we had the dinner in the fridays.
    By Silvia 5thA <3:D🌺

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    1. THERE ARE SOME GRAMMAR MISTAKES IN YOUR POST SILVIA, I WOULD LIKE YOU TO REPEAT IT FOLLOWING THE GRAMMAR PAST SIMPLE RULES AND WRITING SOME ACTIONS YOU DIDN'T DO. THANKS!!!

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    2. Hello MJosé
      After school I arrived home at half past two and I used the Internet for an hour. Later I went to the shopping center with my parents, then we went to "Bauhaus" and we saw a lot of flowers, and we bought some. That friday we didn't ate any snack and we didn't go anywere else. Finally we had dinner at the restaurant "Fridays".
      By Silvia 5thA :D🌺

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    3. SO YOU DIDN'T EAT ANY SNACK!!! GREAT NOW SILVIA, THANKS FOR YOUR ANSWER, IT'S PERFECT NOW!!!

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  24. Hi Maria Jose!
    After school I arrived home at five o'clock. Then I watched TV thirty minutes and I had a snack. I did my homework and studied for my exams. When my mum arrived we went to atletic. I had a shower at eight o'clock. During my parents coocked I was playing with the mobile. We had dinner at half past eight and finally I went to bed at half past nine.

    By Arnau

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    1. BRILLIANT ARNAU, NICE POST WITH GOOD IDEAS AND PERFECT USE OF GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY LEARNED IN CLASS. THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)

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  25. Hello Maria José!!! 👋

    Yesterday afternoon I went to dress up to "falla El Poblé ".
    It was the cavalgade of the ninot.I was dressed the nymph.
    Some friend came to see
    me.I had good .Later I went to the Park with Sandra and Celia to throw. At night we went to diner at restaurant with our family.
    Finaly Sandra came to sleep at my House.
    We were very tired.
    It was a fantastic day.

    María 5B :)🙃

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    1. NICE POST AND FANTASTIC DAY YOU HAD AS I CAN SEE!!! I ONLY MISS THE USE OF SOME ACTIONS YOU DIDN'T DO BUT IN GENERAL IT'S FINE AND THE GRAMMAR IS PERFECT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)

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  26. After school i stay un the park for a while and then i go at half past six yo dance for an hour until half past Seven.Then i take the bus from Albal yo Beniparrell i Get off at the stop and go home.I Get dressed,i hace dinner,may bakpak,i Get dressed for the Next day and half past ten i go to sleep


    By Carmen 5B:)

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    1. CARMEN!! EVERYTHING IS IN PRESENT SIMPLE AND YOU HAVE TO TELL ME YOUR DAY IN PAST AS IT WAS YESTERDAY!!! REPEAT IT!!!

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    2. Yesterday, after school I stayed for a while in the place with my friends to have a snack after about fifteen minutes we went home so that I could get ready to dance. And at six I went to dance .Then I went out and took the bus to Beniparrell to go home, I showered, I had dinner, I prepared my clothes for the next day with the same backpack and I slept.

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  27. Hi MJose,I'm Mario 5thB
    Yesterday, I woke up at ten o'clock I had a delicious breakfast while I watched TV.Later I studied for one hour.At one ocloc'k I went to had a lunch with my family and we saw the mascleta.We played to boards games,it was very fun.I didn't throw petards because it was raining.I had dinner at half past nine and then I went to bed al half past ten.I was very tired.

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    1. THAT'S BRILLIANT MARIO!!! I LOVE YOUR POST, THE IDEAS AND THE CORRECT USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR, GREAT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT:)

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  28. Hello!
    Yesterday wen I arrive school I go yo Sofia's home.Then I go to Padel with Teresa Alba and Sofia it was very funny later Padel im go to my cousin's home I was watched a film and I arrive home at 19:00 ,I had a sower and I had dinner with my family finally I go to bed at 22:30.

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    1. YESTEDDAY, WHEN I ARRIVED HOME I WENT TO SOFIA'S HOUSE. THEN I WENT TO PADDLE LESSONS AND I WENT TO MY COUSIN'S HOUSE. I WATCHED A FILM AND I ARRIVED HOME...I WENT TO BED...
      GALAAAA!!! GO IN PAST SIMPLE IS WENT!!! YOU HAVE TO REMEMBER AS IT IS A VERY IMPORTANT VERB YOU YOU NEED TO USE IT IN AN APPROPRIATE WAY, IT'S OK NOW!!! THANKS!!!

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  29. Hello MJose
    Yesterday When I woke up, I had breakfast and got dressed,later. Maimouna asked me if I wanted to buy firecrackers, I said yes. When I went down to my father's bar, Mai and her cousin were already ready. We bought the firecrackers and went to a park to throw them after a while I went home, because it was already late.I finally took a shower and went to sleep. It was a great day.
    By Valeria.G 5thB

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    1. OF COURSE IT WAS!!! GREAT POST AND GREAT WRITING WITH LOTS OF INTERESTING IDEAS USING GRAMMAR IN PAST AND NICE VOCABULARY!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!:)

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  30. He came from school at a quarter to five. Having a snack at half past five. I finish at six and start with my homework.I finish at eight unless I want and I watch TV until half past eight.So I play Roblox on my mobile with: Celia, Noemí and my cousin.At eleven o'clock I finish playing and I drink a glass of milk, I bite my teeth and go to sleep.From:Assia 5th B.See you tomorrow M.Jose

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    1. THERE ARE LOTS OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES IN YOUR POST ASSIA AS MANY VERBS ARE WRITEN IN PRESENT. REPEAT IT!!!

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  31. Yesterday, I came from school at 17:00 o'clock and I played with my friends at the park, then I went home to do my homework and I watched tv with my family. At nine o'clock I had dinner and I called my grandma. At ten o´clock I went to my bed and I played my tablet for a little time. At last I went to sleep at half past ten. From: Alejandro Rubio. 5th A. Thank you for your attention Maria José!

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    1. BRILLIANT ALEJANDRO, NICE POST WITH GOOD IDEAS AND PERFECT USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!

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  32. Hello M.Jose!!
    Last saturday I woke up at nine o'clock.I had breakfast and I went with my cousin at the Comic Book Fair
    There were a lot of people!
    I bought two t-shirts and a Wonder Woman poster.
    There were many authors and tiktokers.
    Later we went to eat and then home.
    I loved it! Is amazing!

    By Daniela 5thB.

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    1. OH DANIELA!! THAT SOUNDS GREAT!! I LOVE YOUR POST, YOUR IDEAS AND ROUTINES. THE WRITING IS PERFECT!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!:)

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  33. Yesterday after school I went home at 17:00 o'clock and I had a snack, later I do homework and I had study, then I played computer games and I watch TV 1 hour. I had dinner at 20:15 and I red a book, finally I went bed at 21:30. It was a great day. See you next day M.Jose😄
    By: Emma 5thA❤️

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    1. SO YOU READ A BOOK EMMA, REMEMBER THAT THE VERB STAYS WITHOUT CHANGES ALTHOUG THE PRONUNCIATION AS YOU WRITE IS /RED/. IT'S FANTASTIC, I LOVE IT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT :)

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  34. hello M.Jose

    Yesterday after I went home at a quarter to five.I had breakfast, later I do homewoek and I had study, used the internet for one hour.I had dinner at a nine o'clock, finally I went to bed at a half past nine

    By:Lucia 5thA :)

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    1. SO YOU DID HOMEWORK LUCIA...THAT'S NICE, I HOPE SOME MORE BUT THE POST IS FINE, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)

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  35. Hi MªJose i'm RUBEN

    Yesterday after living school i arrived to home at five o'clock.
    Finished to homework at six o'clock , went to dance class at quart past six .
    After i retuned to home at half past seven and played with the tablet,after diner and i went to sleep at quart past ten.

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    1. BRILLIANT NOW RUBEN!!! LOVE YOUR ROUTINES AND NOW IT'S ALREADY PERFECT, WITH SOME GRAMMAR MISTAKES BUT ALMOST PERFECT!!! GREAT!!! :)

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  36. After school i went to home with Valeria and her father in his car at five to five,because it was raining.Later i went to my little sister at the living room to dance because i didn't go to the dance clases.Time after i did my math and natural homework,also study the prepositions of Valenciano.After i had a shower
    ,i ate a sandwich and finally i went to bed at quarter to eleven.


    By: Maïmouna 5thB
    🇸🇳

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    1. YOU'RE SO GORGEOUS MAÏMOUNA AS THEY ARE YOUR ROUTINES!!! LOVE YOUR POST AND YOUR WRITING, NICE IDEAS AND THE WAY TO TELL THEM, PERFECT!!! :)

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  37. After school I play football with my friends at five o' clock later I have a snack at half past five.Monday and Wensday I go to train football after football classes I do my homework,after have dinner at nine o'clock and I go to sleep at ten o'clock.
    By Víctor 5A

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    1. EVERYTHING IS IN PRESENT VICTOR AND YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHAT YOU DID YESTERDAY!!!! IN PAST SIMPLE!!! I DON'T UNDERSTAND THIS WRITING NOW WHEN YOU DID YESTERDAY THE TELEPHONE CALL TEST!!! REPEAT IT!!! :(

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  38. Hello MªJosé:
    Yesterday, I didn't go to school because my stomach hurt, but I didn't go to the doctor. I stayed at my grandparents house and I watched TV all morning, the TV serie that I saw is called The Thundermans. In the afternoon, I felt better and I did my homework, then I studied for the Valencian exam. Later, I had a shower, I had dinner and I went to bed early.

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    1. THAT'S FANTASTIC NOW IZAN, MUCH MUCH BETTER!!! I'M SORRY YOU FELT BAD AND HAPPY AS WELL BECAUSE YOU STARTED FEELING BETTER!!! NICE POST IZAN, THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  39. After school, I was at the academy with my friend Amador. Later I went home, I take a shower and prepared my backpack for the next day. I played with my sister and went to sleep BY FRAN 5B

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    1. GREAT FRAN!!! SHORT BUT INTENSE!!! I LOVE IT AND I THINK IS SO FINE!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  40. After school, I didn't stay in the park, when I got home at a quarter to five, I started to have a snack and watched some videos on the internet. then I started to do my homework at 6 and when I finished the task, I didn't play video games.
    Then I showered and put on my pajamas.
    Then I went to dinner, watched TV for a while and went to bed at a quarter to eleven.
    it was a very long day!!!!
    Amador 5thb

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    1. BRILLIANT AMADOR!!! THE WAY YOU WRITE IS A BIT COMPLICATED AND SOME GRAMMAR FORMULAS ARE NOT EXPLAINED IN CLASS. BUT THE WRITING IS NICE AND YOUR ROUTINES AS WELL, GREAT!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  41. Hi Maria Jose, I'm Aimar. After school at harf past five I went to train soccer, at seven o'clock I finished. Then I went home to study and watch tv for an hour, when it was later I had dinner and at half past ten I went to sleep. It was a fantastic afternoon!

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    1. OF COURSE IT WAS!!! I LOVE YOUR POST AIMAR, IT'S SO NICE AND FOLLOWS THE GRAMMAR RULES LEARNED IN CLASS, THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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  42. Hello Mª José:
    After school I went to musical language and then I arrived home at half past sevent,I do my homework later I study (depends if I had an exam), if I don't had any exam I start to paint,read,play the piano...
    I had a shower at half past nine and then I had dinner at ten or half past ten,I brush my teeth and before I go to sleep and then I read abaut ten or fifteen minuts.

    I LOVED BEING ABLE TO TELL YOU MY WHOLE DAY!!!!!!!!:)

    BY: TERESA 5thA :) :)

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    1. THAT'S SO BRILLIANT TERESA BUT PAY ATTENTION!!!
      I DID MY HOMEWORK...INSTEAD OF I DO MY HOMEWORK
      I STUDIED...INSTEADO OF I STUDY
      I BRUSHED MY TEETH... INSTEAD OF I BRUSH MY TEETH
      I WENT TO BED... INSTEAD OF I GO TO SLEEP

      WITH THESE CHANGES YOUR POST IS PERFECT BUT THE WAY YOU WRITE TELL ME INFORMATION THAT YOU'RE GREAT WRITING AND SHOWING YOUR IDEAS, YOU'VE GOT LOTS!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! :)

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    2. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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  43. When I left school I went to the "BENAMA" park, after half an hour I went home 😀, when I arrived I started having a snack, after having a snack I studied for an hour, then I went to the shower, after taking a shower I had dinner an omelette, then I studied for about twenty minutes and finally went to bed until the next day. By : Andrea 5thB✌🏻

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    1. GREAT ANDREA, NICE POST AND NICE ROUTINES, I LOVE IT!!!!ANYWAY, DON'T USE ALL THE TIME AFTER BECAUSE IT CAN BE REPETITIVE!!! THE REST IS FINE, THANKS FOR COMMENT:)

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  44. YOUR POST IS FINE JOSEP ALTHOUGH YOU USE GO INSTEAD OF WENT!!! BUT IN GENERAL IS GOOD, THANKS FOR COMMENTª!!!:)

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  45. Yesterday did to the scool letter at 16'30 i left scool.leter is goeng to suwimming at five o'clock.Letter finish to suiming and i when i came outi ate there snack. Finally i goent to bed a nine o'colck.
    BY NADIA

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    1. I DON'T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING NADIA!!! IS IT AS DIFFICULT TO WRITE SOME OF YOUR ROUTINES IN A VERY SIMPLE WAY AS WE DID IN THE CLASS???

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  46. Hello Maria Jose
    On Monday after school I got home and put on my soccer bags, ate a Serrano ham sandwich and went to soccer practice.
    When I finished at 6:45 p.m., I got home, took a shower, had dinner while I watched a little TV and finally went to bed at 10 p.m.

    Daniel 5ºA

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    1. YOUR POST IS SHORT BUT NICE AND INTERESTING, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!

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