THIS SUMMER HOLIDAYS
This summer holidays I'm going to spend a very good time. I'm going to go to the beach and I'm going to sunbathe on the sand. I'm going to have a picnic but I'm not going to have a barbecue because I don't like sausages at all!!!
In august I'm going to stay in a hotel but I'm not going to go camping, I prefer to sleep in bed!!! I'm going to listen to music on my MP3 player and I'm going to talk on the phone with my friends.
My mum and dad are going to stay in an apartment in Cullera with my grandma, but they aren't going to go fishing. They are going to make sandcastles and my mum is going to find shells in the beach. My dad is going to read books and my grandma is going to study english, she loves english!!!
My sister is going to swim in the sea, but she isn't going to go surfing, she thinks surfing is dangerous!!!
This is going to be a great summer!!!
WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO THIS SUMMER HOLIDAYS??? WRITE A POST AND TELL ME YOUR FANTASTIC PLANS FOR THIS WONDERFUL MOMENT!!!
This summer holidays I'm going to spend a very good time. I'm going to go to the beach and I'm going to play in the sea, find shells and have a picnic. In July I'm going to stay in a hotel but I'm not going to swim in the swimming pool. I had a great time. In August I'm going to talk to my friends from Zaragoza. Also, I'm going to go fishing with my parents, I love fishing! My mum and dad are going to cook different plates of food for this summer. They are always delicious.
ResponderEliminarGREAT DARIO!!I'M SURE YOU'RE GOING TO HAVE A NICE HOLIDAYS WITH YOUR FAMILY!!! ENJOY!!!
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to the forest.I'm going to put a tent and I grab wood for a bonfire.I put a tent and I was sleep because morning i was expecting a great day.In juli I going to stay in a hotel.I going to the swimming pool with my parents and brother.In august i going to the beach.I going make sandcastles and i swim in the sea becouse towards heat.I bought ice cream because it was very hot.In september I return of holidays tired i and i sleep.
ResponderEliminarI have loved this holidays.
Marcos chiva 5a
Your post is a mess, you talk about your past holidays, not about the plans for your next holidays. I want you to write again the post talking in future...I'm going to.../I'm not going to.../ My mum is going to... etc
EliminarThis summer holidays I´m going to spend a very good time with my parents.In july I´m going to stay in a hotel next to the beach.In the beach I´m going to find shells because It is boring.I´m August I´m going to stay in the house resting because I´m spent good days in September.In September I´m going to stay in a hotel in Granada I´m going to go to the beach.At the beach I´m going to swim in the sea and to have a picnic
EliminarMarcos CHIVA 5a
BRILLIANT NOW!!! FANTASTIC PLANS!!HOPE YOU ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose.
ResponderEliminarThis summer I'm going to have a nice holidays with my family.I'm going to stay in a hotel near the beach.In August I'm going to go to the swimming pool in the weekends.I'm going to go to the beach with my family.In the beach,I'm going to make sandcastles with a bucket and spade,swim in the sea and sunbathe,but I'm not going to find shells,go fhising or go surfing.I'm not going to have a picnic or a barbacue.My mum and dad are going to spend a good holidays.
Mario Durán Sanchís 5a.
Brilliant Mario, that's a very nice comment full of ideas and use of the appropriate grammar, thanks for comment
EliminarThis summer vacation I'm going to have a happy time. I'm going to the park with my friends, I'm going to the beach with my grandmother. I'm going to the pool with my brother but I'm not going to go fishing because I think I do not like fish too much. In August I'm going to Cantabria with my parents Elisa and Miguel and my brother Miguel. We are going to a rural house but we are not going to a hotel because we prefer to go to the countryside. We are going to Santander to La Concha beach but we are not going to the Sardinero beach. We are also going to Asturias and Madrid but we are not going to Galicia
ResponderEliminarMy brother is going out with friends but he is not going to play football, he prefers basketball.
He loves basketball!!!
This summer is going to be great!!!
By Martina Ronfanges 5th A
That's brilliant Martina, very nice plans, hope you enjoy your next holidays!!!
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ResponderEliminarTHIS SUMMER HOLISAYS
ResponderEliminarThis summer tolidays I'm going to spend a very good time. I'm going to the village of my grandparents. I'm going to make excursions by mountain but I'm not going to the pool that the wáter is very cold.
In august I'm going to Cadiz with my parents, I'm going to swim in the ocean and play with my Friends. I'm going to listen music on my mobile and make snorkeling in the sea. We are going to make sandxastles anda we are going to eat ice cream, but I'm not going to make kaysurf that is dangerous. I'm going to go to Gribraltar, there speak English, I'm going to eat fish and chips there.
This is going to be a great summer!!!
By Lucia Barreda 5th A
Fantastic Lucia, I love your plans for your next holidays, hope you have a very good time!!!
EliminarThis summer vacation I will have a very good time.
ResponderEliminarIn July I'm going to Cádiz. I'm going to bathe with my brother and collect shells and stones, but I'm not going to walk on the sand
In August I'm going to a hotel in Granada.
I'm going to go swimming in the hotel pool, but I'm not going to play soccer.
This summer is going to be great
By Pablo Sánchez 5A
Very good Pablo, so you are going to spend your holidays in the south of Spain, hope you have a very good time!!!
EliminarTHIS SUMMER HOLIDAYS
ResponderEliminarI'm going to Paris, the city of love. I'm going to spend a very good time. I'm going with my motorhouse. We're going to the Eiffel tower and the towre museum. Are three or four days in a motorhome to get to France. We're going to Disneyland Paris. I'm going to the beach, I'm going to swim in the sea and I make snorkel. I'm going to eat ice cream.
This summer is going to be very great.
By Aina 5thA
That's awesome!!!!France is so beautiful, Paris, the french countryside, amazing!!!Hope you enjoy!!
EliminarHello Mª Jose,
ResponderEliminarThe summer holidays I'm going to spend a very good time with my family. I'm going to go to camping because we have a mobile home and we're going to do a route through several sites.
In August, I'm going to go to Cabuérniga in Cantabria. I'm going to ride a bike and I'm not going to swim in the river because the water is cold.
My mum and dad are going to go for a walk in the mountains while my brother and I going to take out my rabbit Yaki but we aren't going to play football because there isn't soccer field. I love the animals!!
Then we going to go to Noja in the Cantabria coast. Here I going to swim in the beach and in the swimming pool.
I love the holidays!!
By Miguel 5ºA
That's brilliant Miguel, I love your plans for the summer, have a nice time!!!
EliminarHello,Maria José:
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to Cadiz with my family in july. I'm going to stay in a hotel because I don´t like camping. I´m going to go to the beach and I'm going to sail in a rubber dinghy but I´m not going to do kayak. I'm going to eat in a restaurant but I don´t have a picnic because I prefer to eat comfortably !!!
In august I'm going to Villavaliente with my grandparents and cousins. I´m going to go on bike with my friends. We are going to take sunglasses. It´s going to be hot and sunny.
My mum and dad are going to Greece with friends to celebrate my mother´s birthday. They are going to go on a cruise.
This is going to be a amazing summer!!!
By Elena Juanes. 5A.
WHAT A NICE COMMENT!!! VERY GOOD IDEAS USING THE APPROPRIATE GRAMMAR...HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT TIME!!!
EliminarHello Maria jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays i would like to go to usa but I'm going to jaen,I'm going with my father and mother.I stay at my grandparents housevbecause is near the pool.
Ialways go to the pool with my cousin,I'm going to sunbathe on the grass. I'm going to have for a slush.
I'mgoing to play basketball but I'm not going to play football.
I'm going to go to tje park for listen to music with a speaker, near the pool there is the tennis cour.I'm going to play tennis nut I'm not going to play padel.
Maria Jose this is what I do in august with my famyly
By gonzalo5A
JAJAJA...THAT'S LIFE MY DEAR GONZALO, ONE THING IS WHAT I WANT AND THE OTHER WHAT I REALLY HAVE...I'M SURE YOU ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS IN JAEN, THE USA FOR THE NEXT YEAR!!!!HAVE A WONDERFUL TIME!!!GREAT COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose!
ResponderEliminarthis summer hollidays i'm going to go to de beach with my family and i'm going to go to the swimming pool too.
i'm going to make sandcastles while my mum is going to sunbathe. I'm going to visit my family in my village in Cuenca and i'm going to listen music in my tablet and my sister is going to see movies in the tv.
I'm going to go to my apartment and have a barbecue with my family
this summer is going to be very funny.
By Ana 5A
GREAT ANA!!! I'M SURE YOU'RE GOING TO ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS, NICE POST, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello M.Jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holiday I'm going to benidorm.I'm going to stay in a hotel.I'm going to the beach with my family,in the beachI'm going to make sandcastle,sunbathe and have a picnic but I'm not surfing and fishing.In the hotel I'm going to swim in the pool.
By Claudia 5tA
THAT'S FANTASTIC CLAUDIA!!! HOLIDAYS ON THE BEACH ARE REALLY RELAXING!!! HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY NICE TIME!!!
EliminarThis summer It will be very fun. In july, I'm going to a camping in Torre la Sal (Castellon, Spain).
ResponderEliminarI'm going with a caravan, because I don't like sleeping with a camping tent.
My mum and dad are going to have a barbacue for our family and friends.
I'm going to play with a beachball with my little cousin and I'm going to make sandcastles with bucket and spade. My brother and my grandfather are going to go fishing in the sea while I'm going to listen music.
I'm going to swim in the sea, I love it!
The last day, I'm going to go surfing alone because my brother is very little. It will be a happy summer!
By Adrián Pla 5A
BRILLIANT ADRIAN!!YOU HAVE LOTS OF PLANS FOR YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS!!! HOPE YOU ENJOY A LOT AND YOU HAVE A GREAT TIME!!!
EliminarThis summer I'm going to have a nice holidays with my family.I'm going to stay in a hotel near the beach.In August I'm going to go to the swimming pool in the weekends.I'm going to go to the beach with my family.In the beach,I'm going to make sandcastles with a bucket and spade,swim in the sea and sunbathe,but I'm not going to find shells,go fhising or go surfing.I'm not going to have a picnic or a barbacue.My mum and dad are going to spend a good holidays.
ResponderEliminarby Ian 5B
GREAT IAN!!!HOPE YOU ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS AND HAVA A FANTASTIC TIME AT THE BEACH!!!
EliminarThis summer holiday. I,m going to seand a very good time.
ResponderEliminarI,m going to go camping with my mum and my dad. I,m going to go to the river
but I,m not going to go to the beach. I,m going to go fishing with my friends.
In augost I,m going to the travel and I,m going to stary in a hotel.
My mum is going to go London and she going to go shopping.
My dad is going to go apartament in Malaga and he isn,t going to listen to
Music on your MP3 player.
I loved this holiday.
By Alejandro Belda 5.B
FANTASTIC ALEJANDRO!! I LOVE YOUR PLANS FOR YOUR NEXT HOLIDAYS!!HOPE YOU ENJOY A LOT!!!
EliminarThis summer holiday.i'm going to Granada with my brother i'goingto granparents house near the beach.in in agust i'm to go fishingwith my brother.IN THE BEACH i'm goingto make sandcastels with a buket and espade swiming in the sea and sunbathe but i'm not going to find the shells , go surfing.i'm not going to have a picnicor a barbacue.
ResponderEliminarBY OSCAR MOLINA 5.B
GREAT OSCAR!!! HOPE YOU HAVE A FANTASTIC TIME IN GRANADA!!!IT'S VERY SUNNY AND HOT IN THERE!!! ENJOY!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose.
ResponderEliminarThis summer I'm going to stay in a hotel in Alicante.I going to have a barbecue and I going to go fishing with my grandpa.
My mum is going to swim in the sea and is going to listen to music in your mobile phone.
My dad is going to visit Alicante, is going to swim in the swimming pool and is going to listening to music in your MP3 player.
My grandpa and my grandma are going to stay in a house in the countryside.
My grandpa is going to have a barbecue, is going to swim in the swimming pool and is going to listen the radio.
My grandma is going to swim in the swimming pool, listen to music in your mobile phone and is going to walk in the coutryside.
This is going to be a great summer!!!
By VICTOR 5THB.
I LOVE YOUR PLANS WITH YOUR FAMILY!! THERE ARE SOME MISTAKES VICTOR, YOU HAVE TO WRITE HE'S GOING OR SHE'S GOING WHEN SAYING ANOTHER ACTIVITY, HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY GOOD TIME!!
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ResponderEliminarHi Maria José,
In my summer holidays I’m going to go camping, and I’m going to go to the beach too. But I’m not going to stay in a hotel. I’m go to go with my family and some of my friends. We’re going to swim in the swimpool. I’m not going to go fishing because I don´t like. I’m going to go bicycling for all the camping, because is not dangerous. I’m not going to go skating. My sister isn’t going to bicycling but she's going to listening to music. My parents are going to sunbathe in the sand of the beach,and my grandparents are going to stay in his house and the're going to the town with his friends.
This is going to be a great summer!!! :)
BRILLIANT IRENE!I LOVE YOUR PLANS FOR SUMMER HOLIDAYS!!!HOPE YOU ENJOY A LOT!!
EliminarHello María José.
ResponderEliminarThis summer we're going to Benidorm with my family.
I'm really excited. We're going to stay in a hotel near the beach with a big swimming pool.
I'm going to have a picnic with some friends.
My mum is going to stay in the hotel sunbathing.
While my dad is going to swim in the sea.
My brother and my grandfather are going to make sandcastles because they can't swim.
It will be a great summer!
By Alejandro 5A
BRILLIANT ALEJANDRO!!!ENJOY YOUR PLANS AND HAVE A NICE TIME IN BENIDORM!!!
Eliminarhello maria jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to spend a very good time I'm going to go to the beach I'm going to the pool I'm going to surfing but i'm not going to have a barbacue because i don't like.In august I'm going to go camping .I prefer goin to make sandcastles I'm going to listen to music on my computer player I'm going to swim in the sea I'm going to talkon yhe photos with my friends My mum and dad are going to go a weekend to an apartament in Benidorm but the they aren't going to sunbathe They are going to swim in the seaand my mum is going to find shells in the beach My dad is going to have a barbacue and my grandma is going to stady maths because i love maths My sister isgoing tohave a picnic with your friends but she isn't going to go fishing si thinks fishing is dangerous This is going to be agreat summer
By paula 5B
VERY NICE PAULA!!! IT'S VERY SIMILAR TO MY POST BUT WITH SOME DIFFERENT IDEAS!!! HAVE A NICE TIME!!!
EliminarI’m This summer holidais i’m stay in a hotel with my family and my dog in gandia.
ResponderEliminarI’m going to go a beach and i’m going to swiming in te sea.
I’m not going to have a barbecue but i’m going to have a picnic to my sister and my grandma.
I’m going to go fishing with my mum and dad.
I’m not going to go surfing because it scares me
In the beach i’m going to sunbathe and my mum is going to find shells but i’m not going to make sandcastles and i’m not going to go camping.
This is going to be a great summer!!!
By lucia 5B
GREAT LUCIA!!!FANTASTIC PLANS FOR YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS, HOPE YOU ENJOY A LOT!!!
EliminarHello María José
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to go to the beach and I'm going to go to the swimming pool.
In August, I'm going to stay in a hotel near the beach, in Benidorm with my family. I'm not going to go camping because I don't like to sleep in the camping. I'm going to go to swim in the swimming pool with my mum. My mum is going to sunbathe and read books. I'm not going to swim in the sea because in the water there are jellyfish and I dont like jellyfish.
I prefer make sandcastles.
This is going to be a great summer!!!
BY RUBEN 5B
AWESOME RUBEN!!! FANTASTIC POST WITH GREAT PLANS!!HOOE YOU ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS!!!
EliminarThis summer holidays. I'm going to go to the beach . I'm going to go to the Algarve.I'm going to sunbathe. I'm not going to fishing because I don't like, but I'm going to swim in the sea and I'going to go surfing, my mum thinks than to go surfing is dangerous but I like the dangerous . I'm not going to stay in a hotel because I prefer my caravan and I prefer to go campig.I'm going to have a picnic and I'm going to have a barbacue.
ResponderEliminarI'm not going to find shells and I'm not going make sandcastles.
I want August to arrive.
Hugo salvador 5B
GREAT IDEAS HUGO!!!HOPE YOU ENJOY YOUR HOLIDAYS!!!
EliminarHello mariajose!
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I' m going to spend a fantastic time. I' m going to Moscow to play football with my team. Russia invites then Levante U.D. to a tournament and the levante has made a selection of the children that Will go to that tournament and I'm one le the chosen kids. I'm very happy, I really want to go to Russia. I will sea the red square in Moscow, also we are going to play with international teams. I'm going to get on a plane for the first time, I'm nervous, but very happy. I really want to play football. We will be concentrated in a Moscow complex where there are soccer filds to train. It's going to be a great summer!!
By Jesús Fortea 5°A
THAT'S SO GREAT JESUS!!!HOPE YOU WIN THE TOURNAMENT AND IF IT ISN'T POSSIBLE YOU ENJOY THIS FANTASTIC TRIP!!! HOPE YOU REMIND ME WHEN YOU ARE A FAMOUS AND RICH FOOTBALLER!!! :)
EliminarHello maria jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays i go with my mum to Almeria.
We going to go camping and we sleep in a tend.
One night we going to have a barbecue for a dinner,i'm eat
sausage and beef.
Every day we are going to go to the beach and we going to go have snorkel.
We going to play with a beachball and a bucket and spade.
We aren't going to go surfing because i'm not like surf.
This summer it's going to be fantastic
By Ivan 5b
FANTASTIC PLANS!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE WE'RE GOING TO...NOT WE GOING!!!HOPE YOU HAVE A NICE HOLIDAYS!!!
EliminarHello mariajose!
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to the beach with my family.My brother eat ice cream,my dad going to sunbathe,I'm make sandcastles my grandpa too i never make sandcastles with my brother because it is quite old to make sandcastles and my grandma go fishing.By mariajose
THE GRAMMAR IN THE POST IS INCORRECT, YOU HAVE TO WRITE USING GOING TO, THAT IS THE APPROPRIATE STRUCTURE FOR FUTURE PLANS, REPEAT!!!
EliminarHello Mariajose!
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I'm going to Cuenca to claim the mountains and more.I'm stay in a house of my cousins,I'm play videogames,climb mountaims swim in the sea,but Im not find shells and make sandcastles.After 15 days I'm come back to Albal and I play with Joan every night and every day.
By Adrian Alonso 5A
THE GRAMMAR FUTURE STRUCTURE IS BAD!!!YOU HAVE TO USE GOING TO!!! THE POST IS INCORRECT!!!
EliminarHello Maria José
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I´m goig to campsite Barraquetes in Mareny the Barraquetes where I bath in the pool and have fun with my friends.
I also spend the holidays in the apartment with my family and the dogs Rufus and Neo.
I have a great time in both places but I prefer to be at the campsite because I have many friends and the beach is on.
In August I always travel and this year we go to Manchester
By Aitana Sellés Huerta 5B
THE GRAMMAR FUTURE PLAN STRUCTURE GOING TO IS NOT USED!!!YOU HAVE TO REPEAT USING THIS GRAMMAR!!!
EliminarHelo Maria Jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidadays.Im going to the camping torre la sal.
This is a camping near is the beach in the morningo to the swimmin poll.
In the evening my father and my motherhave a lunch and my brother play fotbool whithis friend edgar
.
¡n the night going to the snad on the beach whit my´s friends
by Alex gitierrez 5ºa
YOU DON'T USE THE APPROPRIATE GRAMMAR STRUCTURE GOING TO. REPEAT!!!
EliminarHello Maria José.
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays im going to apartament in Cullera with my dad, my mum and my sister.In Cullera i want to go to the beach to sunbathe but not swim.My sister she's going to swiming in the sea with my dad.My mum she's going to sunbathe with me.In afternoon im go to swiming pool with my family and then go to sunbathe with my sister.At night we go to Cullera's past to dinner and after dinner for a walk.
By Natalia 5A
YOU DON'T USE PROPERLY THE GRAMMAR IN THE UNIT GOING TO WITH THE DIFFERENT PRONOUN FORMS!!! REPEAT!!!
EliminarHi Maria José!!
ResponderEliminarIn my next summer holidays, I'm going to so holiday camp in Valencia for week.In the camp,I'm going to cook a lot of dishes,do talent activities ,meet new friends,throw in ziplineand swim in the swimming pool...
in august , I'm going to go to my big house with y family.
Here I'm going to play with my cousins very much.We enjoy a lot of in summer.We're going to swim,run dance,sing and do more summer activitie.
I love summer!!!
Bye!!
Zoe Deseta 5B
BRILLIANT ZOE!!I LOVE YOUR PLANS FOR THIS SUMMER, HOPE YOU HAVE A VERY NICE TIME WITH YOUR NEW FRIENDS!!!
EliminarHello María José, I am going to tell you about my summer plans
ResponderEliminarThis summer I'm going out with my family and some of my sister's friends. We will stay in a house. We are going to make a barbecue and we are going to have a picnic together. We are going to go to a mountain and we will be in the pool of the house.
by Jorge Silva 5th B
GREAT PLANS JORGE!!!HAVE A NICE TRIP AND NICE HOLIDAYS!!!
EliminarHello my Name Is Marina. This summer I will go to my town Benafer, I will also go to the pool and to the beach with my family. Mmm ... I love the beach. I would like to go to my grandmother's town, Bronchales, that's cold! I go with my friends with the bicycle in August we do parties in Benafer: bingo, discomovil, bulls, playbacks, etc. In August we celebrate my birthday. I love gifts
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