IN UNIT 5 WE ARE TALKING ABOUT PAST ACTIONS USING THE PAST SIMPLE FORM!!!
TELL ME ACTIONS YOU DID YESTERDAY WHEN YOU ARRIVE HOME!!! HERE YOU HAVE WHAT I DID!!! COME ON!!!
After school I arrived home at five o'clock and then I had a snack at half past five. I went to Pilates lessons at six o'clock and I finished my classes at seven o'clock. Later I used the internet for an hour and I watched TV for thirty minutes but I didn't listen to music or play computer games. Finally I had dinner at half past nine and I went to bed at a quarter past ten.
HELLO,Maria José
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past four.I went to basketball training.When I finished the basketball training I went to had snack.Then I used the internet for two hours and I listened music for half an hours.Finally I had dinner at half past eight,then I watched TV for one hours and I went to bed at quarter past ten.
By Mario Durán Sanchís,5a.
BRILLIANT MARIO, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!
EliminarAfter school, I got home at five fifteen. Then I did the duty of mate i ingles.esquche musica .vi the tv fourteen minutes and I used the internet two hours no social study or religion. I also studied English and I was a bit natural It's hard to play later with my older brother Ramon who is very funny. At ten o'clock I have dinner with my family and I go to bed at twelve o'clock
ResponderEliminarYOU HAVE TO DO IT AGAIN!!!SENTENCES ARE INCORRECT AND THE IDEAS ARE CONFUSED!!! REPEAT!!!
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ResponderEliminarHello, Maria José
After school I arrived home at half past two and then I used the internet but I didn´t watch TV. Later at ten past four I went to the swimming pool and I finished my classes at quarter past five. When I arrived home at six o´clock I had a sandwich and I studied valencian language for two hours. I didn´t study maths. Finally I had dinner at ten o´clock and I watched TV with my family. I went to the bed at half past eleven.
By Elena Juanes. 5A
DID YOU GO TO THE SWIMMING POOL AT TEN PAST FOUR??? AT THAT TIME YOU ARE AT SCHOOL!!!CAN YOU CHECK YOUR COMMENT AND WRITE IT AGAIN PLEASE???
EliminarHello, Maria José:
EliminarOn Friday afternoon I didn´t have school. I arrived home at half past two. I wrote my comment on Saturday and I wrote what I did the previous day. I usually go to the swimming pool every Friday at ten past four, but I write again my comment.
- NEW- After school I arrived home at half past four and the I had a sandwich but I didn´t have orange juice. I went to Florida lessons at quarter to five and I finished my classes at half past six. When I arrived home at seven o´clock I did my homework. Later I used the internet for twenty-five minutes but I didn´t watch TV. Finally I had dinner at nine o´clock and I brushed my teeth. I went to the bed at ten o´clock.
By Elena Juanes, 5A
After school I arrived home at half past six. I went to dancing lessons at quarter past five and I finished at quarter past six. Later I had a shower for ten minutes but I didn't use the internet. I watched TV with my brother for forty five minutes but I didn't cook Pancakes. I had a dinner with my family at nine o'clok. Finally I read a book called Harper and circus of dreams for twenty -five minutes and then I went to bed at ten o'clok.
ResponderEliminarBy Martina Ronfanges 5th A.
BRILLIANT MARTINA!!!THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarAfter school I arrived home at seven o'clock then, I did my homework.
ResponderEliminarI went to dancing clases, I love hip-hop. My dancing lessons started at a quarter past five and I finished at a quarter past six. At home I used the internet for one hour and then i had a shower fot thirty minutes but I didn't watched TV.
I used whatsapp for therty minutes but I didn't talked with my cousins.
I helped with my supper. Finality I readed my book -la palabra mas hermosa- for twenty minutes and I goed to my bed at half past ten.
By Aina 5th A
YOU CONFUSE SOME VERBS YOU HAVE TO WRITE IN THE PAST!!!
EliminarI DIDN'T TALKED IS INCORRECT!!!
I READED IS INCORRECT, READ IS IRREGULAR AND WE WRITE THE SAME FORM AS IN THE PRESENT, ALTHOUGH WE PRONOUNCE IT LIKE THE COLOUR.
GOED IS INCORRECT, AND VERY VERY INCORRECT!!!! CHANGE IT!!!!
ok maria jose
EliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past tour.I did my homework.Then I saw my brother training footbball,later i arrived home at seven o'clock.I use the internet for two hours and finality i watch TV for one hour
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SO YOU USED THE INTERNET AND YOU FINALLY WATCHED TV...
EliminarYOU ARE WRITING IN PAST SIMPLE FORM, REMEMBER!!!
THE WORD FINALITY IS INCORRECT, IT'S FINALLY!!!
After school, I arrived home at a quarter to five and then I taked the snack at a quarter past five. I went to computer class at six o'clock and finished my class at seven o'clock. Later I taked a shower for fifteen minutes and played games for an hour and did not watch television or listen to music. Finally I had dinner at nine o'clock and went to bed at half past ten.
ResponderEliminarSO YOU HAD A SNACK AND YOU HAD A SHOWER!!!! THE VERB TAKE IS TOOK IN THE PAST FORM AND IT'S BETTER TO WRITE HAD A SNACK OR HAD A SHOWER
EliminarAfter school, I arrived home at a quarter to five and then I had a snack at a quarter past five. I went to computer class at six o'clock and finished my class at seven o'clock. Later I had a shower for fifteen minutes and played games for an hour and did not watch television or listen to music. Finally I had dinner at nine o'clock and went to bed at half past ten.
EliminarBRILLIANT NOW DARIO, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarAfter school,I arrived home at four o'clock and then I play basketball whith my dad, four one hour later I did my homework but I used the internet at six o'clock.LaterI went to the park and I didn't lksten to music.Finally I went to bed at ten o'clock
ResponderEliminarBy GONZALO 5A
SO YOU PLAYED BASKETBALL WITH YOUR DAD!!! GREAT GONZALO, NICE COMMENT!!!
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EliminarAfter school arrive at the park at five o´clock.
ResponderEliminarI went home at six o´clock to have a snack,then it was revisión class at quarter past seven,and i finished the class at eight quarter past.
Later i went to the sport center,but I dit not play football.
Arrive home dine fish ,I bathed a ten o´clock.
And finally I went to bed at eleven half past,I read for thirty minutes,but I did not watch tv.
By ADRIAN PLA 5
YOU HAVE TO USE I ARRIVED HOME, I HAD FISH FOR DINNER...AND WRITE THE NEGATIVE FORM IN CONTRACTION AS WE USE IT IN THE CLASS... I DIDN'T PLAY FOOTBALL OR I DIDN'T WATCH TV. THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello María José,
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past four. I had a snack at a quarter to five but I didn't have orange juice. At the afternoon I went to my football training and I finished at seven o'clock. Later I had a shower and I did my homework. I didn't use the internet but I watched TV while I had dinner. Finally I went to bed at ten o'clock.
By Miguel Gallego 5ºA
BRILLIANT MIGUEL!!!THANKS FOR COMMENT!!
EliminarHELLO MARIA JOSE
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past four .I had snack at five o'clock but I didn't have glass of milk .In the afternoon i went to the park at six o'clock,later i did my homework.I did use the Internet but I didn't watched TV .I has dinner at ten o'clock. And i went to bed at half past eleven o'clock.
By Natalia Cortell Rosaleñ.
El último o'clock se a colado
EliminarSO YOU USED THE INTERNET AND YOU HAD DINNER!!! REMEMBER TO WRITE THE VERBS IN THE PAST SIMPLE FORM WHEN WRITING THE AFFIRMATIVE SENTENCES.
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ResponderEliminarHELLO M.JOSE
ResponderEliminarAfter school, I went to the park at half past four. I get home at five o'clock. I ate a sandwich at half past five. In the afternoon I study science. After the study, I did my homework but I use the Internet. I have shower at half past seven. Later, I have dinner and go to bed.
By Claudia
HELLO CLAUDIA!! YOU WRITE SOME ACTIONS IN THE PRESENT TENSE, SPECIALLY AT THE END OF YOUR COMMENT, WRITE IT AGAIN AND CHANGE PRESENT FOR PAST, REMEMBER THEY ARE ACTIONS YOU DID YESTERDAY!!!
Eliminarafter school I arrived home at seven o'clock then, I did my homework. I went to dancing clases, i love hip-hop.
ResponderEliminarMy dancing lessons started at a quarter past five and finished at a quarter past six. At home I used the internet for one hour and then I had a shower for thirty minutes but I didn't didn't watch TV.
I used Whatsapp for thirty minutes but I didn't talk with my cousins.
I helped with my supper. Finality I read my book - la palabra mas hermosa - for twenty minutes and I went to my bed at half past past ten.
By Aina 5th A
BRILLIANT NOW!!THANKS FOR CHECKING YOUR MISTAKES!! IT'S PERFECT NOW!!!
EliminarHello María José
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at five o'clock I had a snacks at five twenty past.I used te internet at half past vive.I didn't listen to music.I día todos youtobers funny for one hour.Later,at half past six I studied Valencian language formas one hour.At watched TV at half past seven for two hours.I had dinner at half past nine.I went todos bed to sleep at quarter past ten.
By Alejandro 5°A.
IT'S OK, YOUR IDEAS ARE GREAT BUT THE WRITING IS CONFUSED, YOU HAVE LOTS OF MISTAKES!!!!TRY TO WRITE CAREFULLY FOR THE NEXT TIME!!!
EliminarHello María José,
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at five o'clock and then I had a snack. I went to dance at half past five and finished my classes at half past six.
Later I did the homework for an hour and I read a book for thirty minutes and I watched TV for thirty minutes too, but I didn't listen to music or play computer games. I had shower at half past eight.
Finally I had dinner at nine o'clock and I went to bed a quarter to ten.
By Lucia Barreda 5º A
GREAT LUCIA, NICE COMMENT, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello mariajose!
ResponderEliminarYesterday, after school I arrived home at five o'clock. Then I went to train football, later I arrived home at eight o'clock. I had dinner at nine o'clock and at quarter past ten I watched tv, I went to bed at half past ten.
By Jesús Fortea 5A
BRILLIANT JESUS, SO YOU WENT TO FOOTBALL TRAINING!!!Thanks for comment
EliminarHello Maria Jose
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at five o'clock and then i had a snack. I went to dance lessons at half past five and i finished my classes at half past six.
I used the internet for one hour. after i saw tv for one hour and i had dinner at half past nine. I went to bed at ten o'clock
By Ana 5A
BRILLIANT ANA, NICE COMMENT, WELL DONE!
EliminarHello M.Jose.
ResponderEliminarAfter school I went to hip hop clases. I arrive home at six o'clock. Later I did my homework for a one hour. I went dinner at half past eight.then I read a book for a twenty minuts and I went to my bed at ten o' clock.
By Claudia 5A
VERY GOOD CLAUDIA, SO YOU ARRIVED HOME AT SIX O'CLOCK...THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarAfter school I arrive home at half past four later I has to do my homework.I watch tv for 1 houre later i has dinner.I read a comic later i saw a movie.Im go to sleep.
ResponderEliminarBy Marcos 5a
YOU HAVE TO WRITE YOUR POST IN PAST SIMPLE FORM!!!SOME ACTIONS ARE IN PRESENT AND SOME OTHER IN THE PAST, SO WRITE IT AGAIN BECAUSE NOW IT'S CONFUSED!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose,
ResponderEliminarAfter school ,I arrive at home at half past four and I went to the academy at five tidl six oclok .
I wached TV for 1 houer and I took shower for ten minutes . I drunk juice at half past six but Ididn't use the computer program . I had lunch at half past eight and I went to bed at half past nine .
By Alejandro Belda 5eB
SOME WORDS ARE INCORRECT IN THE SPELLING BUT THE COMMENT IS NICE AND YOU USE THE APPROPRIATE PAST SIMPLE FORM, WELL DONE!!!
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ResponderEliminarHello Mª Jose
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at a quarter to five then I had a snack at five o’clock.
Later I did my homework and when I finished my homework I studied for thirty minutes.
Later I played whit the play station but I didn’t play computer games or listen to music.
At eight o’clock I had a shower. Finally I had dinner and watched TV with my mother at nine o’clock. I went to bed at ten o’clock.
By Rubén 5th B
I LOVED YOUR POST, NICE IDEAS IN A GREAT COMMENT, THANKS!!!
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ResponderEliminarHello mª José
ResponderEliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past five. Late i did my homework .
I went to walk the dog. I play computer games for ten minutes.then I had a shwoer at half past nine. I had dinner at ten o’clock and I went to my bed at half past tan.
NICE LUCIA, SO YOU WENT TO TAKE THE DOG FOR A WALK...BRILLIANT, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarYesterday, I finished school at half past four. I was having snack in the park. I arrived home at five o´clock. I did my homework and I studied mathematics ,english and naturals during two hours. My day to day is very hard.
ResponderEliminarYesterday, I didn´t listen to music , I didn´t play computer games because I didn´t have time.
Finally I had dinner at haft past eight and I went to bed at half past nine.
Hugo 5 B
GREAT HUGO, VERY NICE COMMENT!! WELL DONE!!
EliminarYesterday, I got up at eight o’clock, after I did my bed at half past eight.
ResponderEliminarI didn’t use the internet and I didn’t go to the park in the morning.
In the afternoon, I did maths and science homework.
In the evening, I didn’t have dinner at eight o’clock. I went to bed at half past eight.
Irene 5º B
THANKS FOR COMMENT IRENE, YOU WRITE LOTS OF THINGS IN THE NEGATIVE FORM!!!THE NEXT TIME TELL ME SOME THINGS YOU REALLY DID WHEN YOU ARRIVED HOME!!
EliminarHello maria jose
ResponderEliminarYesterday i geted up at eight o'clock and i uses the internet.Later,i eated my breakfast at half past eight.
After lunch i played videogames at my friend and i lunch
Spagheti.Later i played at my friend at a four o'clock.
Later when at a visit for the uncle the my friend at six
o'clock,yesterday was my favourite day.
By Ivan 5B
YOUR IDEAS ARE QUITE CONFUSED IVAN!!! THE PAST OF THE VERB EAT IS ATE (IRREGULAR), AND YOU HAVE TO SAY " I HAD LUNCH"...TRY TO WRITE IT AGAIN USING THE VERBS YOU KNOW IN SIMPLE SENTENCES, DON'T COMPLICATE YOURSELF!!!
EliminarHello Maria jose.
EliminarYesterday i had breakfast at half past eight,Later i when to school at quater to nine and i leaved school at half past four and i played for my friends for one hour.I didn't go to the supermarket
but i when to my home and i found a glasses in the
bed.
By Ivan 5b
yesterday I arrived home half past five.I talk to my mum one hour.Later I used the internet for two hour.I study english half an hour and I watch TV ten minuts.I have dinner at nine o´clock.I read a comic Mortadelo y Filemon 20 minuts and later go to bed at half past ten.
ResponderEliminarBy Aitana 5-B
YOU WRITE LOTS OF YOUR ACTIONS IN PRESENT SIMPLE FORM AND YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT YESTERDAY!!! EVERYTHING IS PAST!!! WATCHED, WENT, STUDIED, TALKED... WRITE YOUR POST AGAIN TAKING INTO ACCOUNT MY ADVICE!!
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ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose
Yesterday i arrived home at half past five.I used the internet for ten minutes.I didn't go to the supermarket but i went to the park.I finished dinner at nine o'clock.I watched my night video at half past nine.I didn't talk to my mum but i did talk to my dad.I went to bed at ten o'clock.
By:Marian 5th B
BRILLIANT MARIANA!!! WHAT A NICE COMMENT!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello Maria José
ResponderEliminarYesterday I used the internet for twenty minutes I didn't go to the park I go to the supermarket I didn't talk to my grandma I watched TV for ten minutes and I didn't talk to my grandpa.
By Víctor 5thB.
Bye
SO YOU WENT TO THE SUPERMARKET AND YOU SAW RUBEN IN THE PARK BY THE WAY...NICE COMMENT VICTOR, WELL DONE!!
EliminarAfter school I arrived home at half past three and then
ResponderEliminarI had lunch at four o'clock. I went to pool swimming lessons at half past four. I finished my classes at quarter past five.
Later I watched film in a tablet but I didn't went to the park.
Finally I had dinner at nine o'clock and I went to bed at half past eleven.
By Jon Mario 5thB
SO YOU DIDN'T GO TO THE PARK...NICE COMMENT JON, GREAT!!!WELL DONE!!!
EliminarI'm sorry , I didn't realize
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ResponderEliminarHello Maria José,
ResponderEliminarYESTERDAY...
I went to the horse riding.I went to the supermarket but I didn't go to the park.
I played with my friends.I talk to my grandma by phone.I rollerbladed with Irene and Nerea.I didn't visited my granma.I didn't play computer games but I listened to music.I study english for 1 hour and I watched TV for thirty minutes.
by Zoe 5th B
So you didn't visit grandma and you studied english...remember the grammar rules Zoe!!Well done!! thanks for comment!!
EliminarHello Maria José
ResponderEliminarYESTERDAY...
I went to the supermarket with my mum.I arrived home at half past five.I study english for 1 hour.I do my homerwork for ten minutes.I had snack at six o'clock and used the internet for thirty minutes but I didn't play computer games.
I had a shower twenty minutes.I had dinner at nine o'clock and watched TV for fifty minutes but didn't read a book.I went to bed at half past ten.
BY NEREA 5THB
BRILLIANT NEREA, VERY NICE COMMENT!!!WELL DONE!!!
EliminarAfter school i arrive home at a halfpast five and then.Ihad a snack at a six o'clock .I went to the academy lessons at a six o'clock and i finished the classes at a seven o'clock.Later i had a shower for trn minutes and i watched tv with my family for one hours but i didn't listened to musicor play the computer game.Finally i hada dinner at a half past nine and i went to bed at a quarter past ten
ResponderEliminarBY PAULA 5THB
So you arrived home, you played computer games but you didn't listen to music, great Paula, well done!!! thanks for comment!!
ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose
ResponderEliminarYesterday I woke up at 8:00. After that I had breakfast when I finished getting dressed. I went to school. In school I had a great time because we saw a movie. I left school at 5:30. When I left school I went to train football. When I finished I took a shower and studied English 1 hour later I went to bed
from jorge here you have my story!
GREAT JORGE!!!THAT'S FANTASTIC, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!
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