Dear Class 5A/B,
Last summer holidays I went to Norway. It was fantastic!!! The countryside in Norway is amazing!!! There were big lakes and there was a waterfall. There was a bench in a path next to the lake. There were some mountains and glaciers over there. There was a small village in the valley and there were two cruise boats in the lake. There were some flowers near the lake and there was a path in a beautiful wood. There were many trees in the wood, but there weren't any animals. The weather wasn't sunny or hot, it was cloudy and cold!!! It was great!!!
See you soon,
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ResponderEliminarLast holiday,i went to paris.it is my favorite place becouse i sow a lot of things and i was at an french castle.
ResponderEliminarI was in disneyland with my parents but i wasn`t in louvre museum .
I was in a some parks with my brother but i didn´t see any animals.
I was in Elffel Tower and i went up stairs and i so some bulidings and some monuments.
I didn´t see any birds because the sky wass cloudy.
I love Paris and i was so happy in there with my family.
I want to come back¡¡
By Marcos Chiva 5a
Your comment is good but i want you to tell me things there was or there were, there wasn't or there weren't as I explained in class. Try again!!!
EliminarI went to Madrid last year. The are m any places to visit. I was in Bernabéu with my sister and my parents. I Like football soo much. I went to "el retiro", there was a lot of trees. Next to ir was the crystal Palace . I visited wax museum. I was to an italian restaurant, there were some americans people. I went to a hotel in the Centre of Madrid. I like very much Madrid.
ResponderEliminarI went to return one day!
By Jesus Fortea 5A
So there were lots of trees in Retiro park..and there were lots of places to visit...I like your post, thanks for comment!!!WELL DONE!!!
EliminarLast summer holidays I went to Honduras.It was fantástic!!! The countryside in Honduras is amazing!!! There was a waterfall next-to the forest. There were lots of boats in the coast. Next-to the coast there were many houses and there was a small port. The weather was sunny and hot,it wasn't cloudy and cold. It was great!!! See you soon,DARÍO.
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT DARIO!!An amazing description with lots of details and a perfect use of vocabulary and grammar!!!thanks for comment, well done!!!
EliminarHello,Maria José.
ResponderEliminarLast summer holidays I went to Alicante. I was amazing holidays with my family!!!I went to a hotel.There were a lot of swimming pools with bigs slides,It was sou funny. There were many american people. I met an american friend and I try to spoke in english whith him. The weather wasn´t cloudy or cold,it was sunny and hot!!It was great!!.
See you soon,
MARIO DURÁN SANCHÍS.5a
FANTASTIC MARIO!!so you met an american friends, I'm sure you enjoyed and your friend too, you have a very good english and it's great you can use it in meaningful situations, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarOne of my vacations I went to almeria to the natural park of cabo de gata.
ResponderEliminarThere were many mountains, there were valleys between the mountains.
There was a bridge surrounded by flowers that crossed it and reached the shore of the beach.
There was a town in front of the sea that all the houses were white and of the same height,
Also, there were some boats to navigate the beach, they give you a short trip.
There is a lot of very varied vegetation, in the middle of a lake there were many flamencos running
Above the water, the weather was very hot and very dry.
It was fantastic everything I saw, I had a great time !!!
by lucia 5b
BRILLIANT LUCIA!!CABO DE GATA IS AMAZING!!!and your description too!!! It's got quite a complicated use of grammar but the result is very nice, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
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ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose.
My last vacation was in summer and I went to Guadalajara. I went to a hotel, There was a very cold pool and near there the river Tajo where I bathed with my brother and my parents, it was fun and I've been going there for two years. The town was not very populated. I met the daughter of the hotel and we got along well. The weather was cold but it was not raining, towards the sun. There were also many animals, I took care of a stray cat.
I see you in class.
JOAN REIG 5ª
GREAT JOAN1!!It's not necessary you use grammar you don't know yet as "i've been going..." but it's a great effort do your best while writing. The description is very nice wit lots of ideas and a explanation about the weather, love it!!! thanks for comment, bye!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose .
ResponderEliminarLast summer I went on vacation with my family to Peñíscola.
We went to a hotel where there was a heated pool where we spent one morning because it was raining.
There was also a pool with slides and monitors that played games and we had a great time.
One day we went to see the castle of Peñíscola, it is very big and beautiful. There are many shops and restaurants. There have been recorded several movies like "Juego de Tronos" y "El chiringuito de Pepe".
We had a great time
By Pablo Sánchez 5A
VERY GOOD PABLO!!!Your holidays comment is very nice with lots of ideas and details. You have to use only the vocabulary and grammar we use in the class and write your posts on your own, so that you can learn properly the class contents. Thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose,
ResponderEliminarLast holydays went to Iceland, It’s wonderfull. Iceland it’s a island, arrives by plane. I can see more new things. There were many waterfull and any big lakes. Too see geisers, it was amazing¡¡¡ Last night ican see something wonderfull, an aurora boreal¡¡¡, the sky was illuminated the green colour. They told me it's because of the sun and you can see only at the poles. It was a fantanstic travel¡¡¡
By Irene Crespo 5ºB
GREAT COMMENT IRENE!!!I think you did a fantastic journey!!! So there were many waterfalls and many big lakes...fantastic!!!
EliminarHello MªJose,
ResponderEliminarLast summer holidays I went to Salou,(Tarragona). It was funny and fantastic! I went to a hotel. There was a big pool and a jacuzzi inside it. There was a long beach near the hotel with a large stone path next to the sea. There was a big walk with a large fountain of colors.
One day I went to Portaventura World. It was amazing!!There were many countries represented there, and I got on many attractions. It was great!!!
The weather wasn't cloudy and cold, it was sunny and hot.
It was great!
I liked everything I did.
By Rubén 5thB
WHAT AN AMAZING POST RUBEN!!!I think it's a great comment full of nice ideas with a good amount of vocabulary and grammar expressions learned in the class, AWESOME!!!WELL DONE!!!
EliminarDear 5ºA:
ResponderEliminarLast summer holidays I went to Tenerife. It was fantastic!!. There was a volcano called Teide, there were many rocks and lava but there weren´t any trees. There were some fields. I couldn´t climb to the top the Teide because the telesferico wasn´t work.
There were a city very beautiful and there were a lots of banana trees. There was a aquatic park called Siam Park, the best of world. There was a zoo called Loro Park, there were parrots, killer whales, sea lions, penguins and many other animals. The weather was sunny and hot, it wasn´t cloudy!!! It was great!!!
I see you soon.
Elena.
By Elena Juanes. 5ºA
BRILLIANT ELENA!!!i love your post, your great comment and your perfect use of the vocabulary and grammar learned in the class, nice descriptions including the weather!!WELL DONE!!
EliminarDear , Maria José :
ResponderEliminarLast summer holidays I went to Almería with my family. It was great !!
There were some beautitul beaches but there weren´t any trees on the beach. I went to the Alcazaba and Cathedral were both important historical in Almería city. There was water park in Vera but there wasn´t bird in the water park. The weather wasn´t rainy , it was sunny !
I went to Almeria in august I hope to return soon. It was amazing !!!
See you soon, Martina 5th A.
PERFECT MARTINA!!! WHAT A BRILLIANT COMMENT!!! I'm sure your holidays were fantastic and you describe the places you visited properly!!!nice use of vocabulary and grammar, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello María Jose.
ResponderEliminarLast sumer holidays I went to París.
It waa fantastic!! The Eiffet Tower in París is amazing!! There were big houses and big streets. There was big church (Notredam) on a path.
There weren't trees on the wood, but it was a little polluted city.
There was a tower called the Eiffel Tower that was the time of París.
There weren't mountains and valley. I was very cold!! I was great!!
I see you soon.
Gonzalo 5A.
FANTASTIC GONZALO!!Paris is an amazing city everybody have to visit once in life!!! So there weren't any mountains or valleys...and it was very cold!!!!yeaa, the weather in France is cold and wet so you have to use warm clothes, nice post with great ideas, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose. Last sumer holidays I went to Montañeros.I was fantastic!.I went to a hotel.There was a big hotel.In hotel there was a gimnas,a pool and jacuzzi.Behind the hotel there was a river and rocks.In river there were a fishes.There wasn't a grass. Sergio 5A
ResponderEliminarHello Sergio, your ideas are nice but your use of the grammar is incorrect because you mix up singular with plural and there are lots of mistakes in the vocabulary words. Try to do it again adding some more information about your holidays, thanks!!!
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ResponderEliminarDear Mª Jose and class.
ResponderEliminarThe last summer holidays I went to Huesca whith my parents. We visited many places and everything very nice.
I went to the Castle of "Loarre", the scenery is amazing!!!
It's located in the plain of the "Hoya de Huesca", there wasn't any wood, there was a large lake and very high mountains. There were horses on the plain.
I also went to the "Mallos de Riglos". There were tall rocks, there were many vultures. There was a river nearly.
There was a small village and a small church too. There were many peaple who were climbing.
The weather was very hot!!!. We got sunburnt!!!
See you soon.
By Lucia Barreda 5A
BRILLIANT LUCIA!!! NICE POST!!!You use a good amount of vocabulary learned in the class and the grammar structures are perfect. Thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarDEAR CLASS 5A
ResponderEliminarLast sumer holidays I went to Cuenca.It was fantastic!I went to home of my oncles.The countrside was beutefule i were a woods and mountains.There were not beaches.
By Adrián Alonso 5A
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ResponderEliminarDEAR CLASS 5A
ResponderEliminarLast sumer holidays i went to Cuenca.I das fantástico!.I went to the home of my oncles.There was a big house.The countryside is beutefule there were a mountains and woods.
Thre were not beaches.There was a river.Un the river there were a fishes.
By Adrián Alonso 5A
HELLO ADRIAN!!! I need you repeat your comment so there are lots of grammar and vocabulary mistakes. You have to pay attention while writing so that you express your ideas correctly. You mix up singular with plural ideas. Try to write a bit longer post without mistakes.
EliminarLast summer holidays I went to the mountains Cazorla (Andalucia). I was in a beautiful, old cottage. I saw a deer in the woods with its family. It was near the camping. The weather was very hot during the day and it was very cold at night. I liked walking in the mountains. I took many photos. I have fantastic memories, beauase I enjoyed a lot.
ResponderEliminarJon Mario 5b
Can you tell me some more things about your holidays describing some photos or things you saw???
EliminarHello M. José
ResponderEliminarThe last vacations went to London. It was fantastic!
I liked the Big Ben, it is tall and very beautiful. The Tamesis River crosses the city, next to it there was a giant ferris wheel called the London Eye. There are many stores in the center. There was a three storey M&M's store near our house. There are many parks, huge and very green, I like to walk in them. The English houses are different and very beautiful, and the double-decker buses were fun. The weather was very variable, there was sun, clouds and a rainy day. It was a very fun vacation!
By Claudia 5º A
Your post is nice Claudia but I want you to describe images from London using there was or there were, grammar structures in the past learned in the class. Add some more information talking about this please, thanks!!!
EliminarHello M.Jose.
ResponderEliminarMy vacation in summer were in Santander.The landscape was very beautiful.
We went to visit the village of Potes.There were mountains,there was a river with a bridge.
There were houses and Stone paths,there wasn´t train station.But if there were Green valleys and animals.Near a waterfall and a colourful flower path.There weren´t castles,but there were fields.
In summer it is very hot and in Winter very cold.
The views are very nice from the cable car.
By Adrian pla 5.A
BRILLIANT ADRIAN!!!Very nice post with a good use of vocabulary and grammar, I love your descriptions, Santander is amazing, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello M.Jose!
ResponderEliminarThe last summer vacation I was in Cantabria with my family.
The first week I was in Cabuérniga, a very nice town. There were many cows loose in the green fields. There was a river with crystal clear water but there was no bridge that crossed it. There were village houses and there were no tall buildings. In the campsite, there were rabbits and donkeys, but there were no farms. There was a supermarket and we were going to buy by bicycle. A beautiful place.
Then, we went to Noja where there was beach and rocks. I practiced surfing. There were great mountains where we made several excursions. There were no trees, there were fields.
They were an amazing vacations!!!
by Miguel Gallego 5.a
GREAT MIGUEL!!!A nice description of a very beautiful place like Cantabria. So there weren't any trees but there were some fields...or there weren't any farms...remember you can write the sentences using the negative form with a contraction, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
Eliminaralex 5a
ResponderEliminarMis ultimas vacaciones fueron en cuenca.
en el viaje acia mucha calor,i no teniamos aire acondicionado.
Cuando llegamos mi padre se quedo montando la tienda,i nosotros nos fuimos a la piscina.En la piscina abia unacueva con una catarata que se abria a la 1:00 i a las 2:00.
Lo que mas me molo fue que mis primos tamvien fueron.
Descripcion:avia unas pistas de tenis,de foot ball,de padel,tamvien avia una mini granga con:ovejas cabras toros i gallinas.pero lo que mas me gusto fue el rio ,que avian peces que te chupaban los pies.
IN SPANISH???? WHAT'S THIS ALEX???
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Eliminarlo has hecho con el traductor verdad????
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EliminarHello maria jose :
ResponderEliminarMy vacations in Segovia.Segovia is a fantastyc city in Castilla i león,the aqueduct is very big and beautyful.
The infomation center is behing the aqueduct.In center is a
some restaurants and the shops present.Segovia is in the mountains and the climate is very cool, in the winter snows
.The important monumento is Alcázar de Segovia,is a castle
and there are pictures to the khings of Segovia.
I like Segovia!!!
Ivan Albiach 5B
Hello Ivan!!!I'm sure your trip to Segovia was amazing but you have to describe what you see using the grammar learned in the unit, that is, there was... there were... there wasn't or there weren't...try to imagine photos of your trip and describe Segovia taking into account the contents learned in the class!!! Everything in the past because your holidays are part of the past now!!!!!!
EliminarMafia jose el corrector me a cambiado monument a monumento
ResponderEliminarAnd Maria to Mafia!!! what is terrible, ohh my God!!!
Eliminarhello maria jose im Ares,my trip was to TOLEDO , to see my cousins,we were in a house a four ourselves ...with a cave in the basement...it was very yuyuuu..we did many excursions ,to see TOLEDO and we made a very cool route ,and wee also went to see the tagus river and i bathed ...the other day we made a route to the mountain and saw many eagles and pass by suspensión bridges,very high..I had a great time by ARES 5B
ResponderEliminarHELLO ARES!!! I need you use the vocabulary and grammar structures used in the class, there was.. there were... there wasn't or there weren't... try to imagine again you photos of Toledo and describe the countryside in there, thanks!!!
Eliminarin last summer i went to cuenca .There were a lot of countyside tere and boungalows.
ResponderEliminarIn the swimming pool,there wasa caveand infront of the campin are the river , and sam campin tends.
by alex gutierrez
Do you want me feel crazy Alex??? I don't understand anything, pay attention at your writing and tell me properly your holidays in Cuenca, DO IT AGAIN!!!
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EliminarHello M.jose
ResponderEliminarLas summer I went to holidays with my father, my sister and some friends to Lanzarote. We saw many volcanoes and lava seas. We went to a very small island by boat. I swam in the Atlantic Ocean. We made a camel route and it was amazing. I would repeat this trip again.
By Ana 5A
HELLO ANA!!!I want you to describe using the grammar used in the unit what you see in Lanzarote, that is...use there was...there were, there wasn't or there weren't and the vocabulary learned in the class. Try again!!!
EliminarOk. M.jose thanks you
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ResponderEliminarHello María José.
Last summer holidays I went to Altea. It's a fantastic town!!! Altea is on a hill, the views were very beautiful!!! There were many white houses. The hotel was amazing!!! My room was the biggest room in the hotel. The swimming pool was very big.
Bye.
Víctor 5B.
Can you tell me some more things about Altea using the vocabulary and grammar learned in the class, your post is very nice but i would like to know something else about your fantastic trip to this beautiful town in Alicante!!!
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EliminarHello María José.
Last summer holidays I went to Altea. It's a fantastic town!!! Altea is on a hill, the views were very beautiful!!! There were many white houses. The hotel was amazing!!! My room was the biggest room in the hotel. The swimming pool was very big. In my first day in Altea I was going to the town hall. Some streets in Altea were stairs. The beach was next to the hotel. Altea is not a very big town.
Bye.
By Víctor 5B.
Hello M.Jose
ResponderEliminarIn my last holidays i went to Ibiza. It was funny! I was in a hotel near to the beach. There were beatitul vienes, i could see the city and the sea at the same time. I was a month with my parents and my uncles.
There were a los ir houses, there were many shops and restaurants. There were a lot of mountains with woods, but there wasn't any river.
The weather esa fantastic. In summer all days are very hot and sunny.
In recommend to go!
By Alejandro Ibáñez 5°A
GREAT ALEJANDRO!!That's a fantastic journey and you describe it perfectly using the vocabulary and grammar learned in the class, WELL DONE!!
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ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose
In my last holidays i went to Cuenca.It was funny!I was in a home of my uncles next to the mountain.There were beattiful countryside.I was a mountain whith my parents and my uncles.
There were some mountans and woods but there wasnt any beach.There were many shops,restaurants and parks.
See you soon,
Adrian Alonso 5A.
hello Adri I'm Aina
EliminarMy family of my grandpa goes every summer to Cuenca
So "i was in a mountain with my parents and uncles...". The comment is nice, there are some mistakes as "there wasn't any beach" instead of "there weren't any beaches", but it's ok, thanks!!!
Eliminarhello M.Jose
ResponderEliminarIn the lasts easters I went to Bejís. It was very fun!
In the camp I met more Friends. Some of my Friends were Lorena and Kevin.
The camp was next to a lake and behind the camp there was a canteen where were more tables and were more chairs. The camp was very very big and there were some bedrooms. There were some bunks beds in the bedrooms.
Outside there were many mountans with some woods. In the woods there were more trees ,there were 2 rivers, but there weren't any restaurants or shops.
The weather was happy, all the days was very hot and very sunny.
by Aina 5A
BRILLIANT AINA!!!THAT'S A FANTASTIC POST!!!LOVE IT!!!Nice description of the countryside in a lovely place, WELL DONE!!
Eliminarthank you Maria jose
EliminarMy trip was Toledo,city full of monuments and cathedrals ,there is a Wall that surrounds the city and downs the river that gives it all the way around.there are many bars that are in old caves...And at nite is very cool all lit up its a very nice BY ARES 5B
ResponderEliminarYOUR COMMENT IS IN PRESENT ARES!!!And we are learning the past grammar!!!
EliminarHi Mª Jose:
ResponderEliminarLast summer holidays I went in Asturies. There were a lot of valleys. I was a valley with a river and a waterfalls. There were a bridge over the river. I was in sella river. It was wonderfull!!
There were smalls villages near river. Very nice.
I was in the nord with my dad, mum and my sister. We were in the beach are fantastics ¡!!, but the water is very cool.
we were in restaurants the typical food. I loved the cachopo.
I loved Asturias.
Hugo 5B
GREAT HUGO!!!So there was a bridge over the river...nice comment from a wonderful place, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello Maria José,
ResponderEliminarMy last trip to Malaga was so interesting !
When we got to the eamping we saw the beaeh near . We went to the Ronda . There were mountains close to the beaeh . Between the mountains there were some valley .
There was a famous bridge ouer the river .There were not any lake next to the eamping where we stayed.
BY Alex 5.B
FANTASTIC ALEX!!so there weren't any lakes near the camping, what a pity!! i love the lakes!!!nice comment using countryside vocabulary and appropriate grammar, WELL DONE!!
EliminarHello M.jose
ResponderEliminarLast summer I went holidays with my father, my sister and some friends to Lanzarote. There were many volcanoes and lava seas very beautiful. There was an island where there were some houses and many palm trees. There were many roads to make routes and there were some camels too. I would repeat this trip again.
By Ana 5A
BRILLIANT NOW ANA!!! FANTASTIC COMMENT!! WELL DONE!!
Eliminarhello M.Jose
ResponderEliminarLast summer vacation i went to London. The Big Ben is very nice! There were a river called Tamesis. There weren´t many trees. There weren´t mountains.
BY CLAUDIA 5.A
So there was a river called Thames...it's a very big and deep river, isn't it??? now it's ok!!!thanks for comment again!!
EliminarMy trip was Toledo.There were a lot of monuments and cathedrals,there was a Wall that surrounds the city. There was a river near of the city.I was with my mum ,dad and my brothers .There were many restaurants that are in old caves...But there weren´t lakes and neither there weren´t waterfalls.At night Toledo is very nice .It was all illuminated. we were in a city wonderfull¡¡
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT ARES!!!GREAT NOW!!!You write the description in the past form with lots of vocabulary references, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!!
Eliminarares 5b
ResponderEliminarMy vacation in Elche. I was at a campsite with friends. The campsite was called CAMPING LA MARINA. And I also throw in many slides. We slept in tents where we could not sleep much. There was a beach near the campsite and a small forest. I made a friend the last day that we stayed at the campsite. His name is Marc. We took a bike ride, we toured the entire campsite. The next day I went to the park for a while when I left the park and went home.
ResponderEliminarI love CAMPING LA MARINA¡¡¡
By Jorge 5B
BRILLIANT JORGE!!!Nice trip and nice description of the campsite. Perfect use of grammar and vocabulary learned in the unit, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarLast summer holidays I went to Mareny de Barraquetes in the campsite.It was fantastic!The campsite its cool because i have a lot of friends.In the campsite were two swimming polls,first so big and have a very cool slide.And the second pool its small and has nothing.There was also a very large football field of grass and a ground tennis field.There was a park and a restaurant.the park its so beatiful and have more slides and swings.The weather is very hot which is very good because the beach is next to the campsite.
ResponderEliminarI love the Camping Barraquetes
By Aitana Selles Huerta 5B
GREAT COMMENT AITANA!!!Very good explanation with lots of grammar references used in the unit, thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!
ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose,
ResponderEliminarMy last holidays i went to the mountains. There was a nice lake next to the mountains and there was a bridge to go to the other side of the mountains. I was in a wooden house in front of many trees. There was a big park next to my wooden house. It was very nice!!!
BY PAULA 5B
The last summer holidays, I went to Quesa.
ResponderEliminarI like very much this place, because it's very beautyful and amazing.
I enjoy a lot of with my family there were two mountains,a lake and a bridge across the lake there were a lot of plants and trees into the mountains.There was a waterfall next to the mountains.At finst,it's cloudy,but finally the sun was shiny and the day was very hot.
It's great day!We will return the next summer.
by Zoe 5thB
GREAT ZOE!!AMAZING POST with lots of vocabulary and grammar references learned in the unit, I love it!!!thanks for comment, WELL DONE!!
EliminarHello MARIA JOSE
ResponderEliminarThe last holidays,I went to Barcelona.There were trees in the wood.There was a bridge over the river.There wasn't a waterfull and there weren't paths in the wood. there are some flowers in the wood.there was a valley between the mountains.THERE are some houses on the mountain there was a path next to the river.
by nerea 5thb
FANTASTIC NEREA!!There are some mistakes because you have used the present grammar instead of the past but the description is nice. I imagine this countryside near Barcelona because Barcelona is a very big city without rivers, mountains or woods. Tell us the village please!!!
EliminarHELLO MARIA JOSE
ResponderEliminarThe last holidays.I was in my aunt's village.There were small houses, fields, mountains and there was a valley. There was a bridge over the river. There were a wood next to the river. Behind the mountains there was a castle.
By Natalia 5A
So there was a wood next to the river, fantastic!!!Can you tell me where is this village??? It looks great!!thanks for comment.
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