HI EVERYONE!!! HAVE A LOOK AT MY POST AND TRY TO WRITE A SIMILAR ONE ABOUT YOUR HOLIDAYS!!! USE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS ADAPTED TO YOUR ENGLISH LEVEL!!!
Summer holidays are fantastic!!! I like the mountains, the beach, travelling around the world and visiting interesting places!!!
On holiday I have a very good time! I talk to friends, I listen to music, I visit monuments and great museums, I buy an ice cream, I go to restaurants, I read comics, I watch the sunset on the beach, I swim in the swimming pool and I go hiking on the mountains. It's great fun!!!
This is me during my holidays!!!
THE LAST DAY IS FRIDAY 30TH SEPTEMBER!!!
Hello María José,on muy holidays i went ti many places but most of the time i was un Albal. One day i was un muy vacations hose that is near the beach i was walking with muy auto and muy cousins and web foud lote of crabs and one of them pinches me.Ne reality i duda lote of dameg but well.These are muy holidays.bye.
ResponderEliminarBye: Assia 6B
NICE ASSIA!!! THERE ARE SOME SENTENCES I DON'T UNDERSTAND AT ALL BUT I'M SURE YOU ENJOYED YOUR DAY AT THE BEACH WITH YOUR COUSINS!! GREAT, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!:)
EliminarDuring my vacationsthey operated on my father,iwas un my town for a month and a half,bronchales ,two days in Montanejos and what remains i estayed un Albal.
EliminarHello María José, this summer I have been in my town (Montanejos). I have made new friends, I have gone on a route through the mountains, I have eaten paella, but above all I have had a great time. Bye Nuria Moya 5ºA
ResponderEliminarI LOVE MONTANEJOS AS IT IS A GREAT VILLAGE BY THE MOUNTAINS WITH A NICE RIVER AND COLD WATER!!! YOUR POST IS GREAT, THANKS FOR COMMENT NURIA!!!
EliminarThanks Maria Jose
EliminarHello María José, this summer I have traveled to Mallorca with my whole family. I really enjoyed traveling by plane. The beaches were very nice, but what I liked the most was the food at the hotel and also the pool. Maria Moya 5º A
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT!!! I WENT TO MENORCA IN MAY AND I REALLY LIKE IT!!! YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS SOUND AMAZING MARIA, AND THE POST IS SO NICE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarThanks
EliminarHello, un summer holidays I went to the montain with my cousin, and the last week i went to romania to muy parents, be enjoi very much, but I coming again
EliminarHi Maria Jose!!!In my summer holidays I went to many places,I went to an hotel in Cambrils and I swam in the swimming pool, went to the beach,read a book...Then I was in Alcala de Jucar whith my cousin and my dads and my cousin and my played vidio gemes,cooked,did the homewok,painted...Finaly my dad, my mum and my, we went to a village called Tolosa for a walk.The views are very beautifuls.This is my sumer holidays!!!!
ResponderEliminarBy Silvia 6thA🤍:3
Thank you Maria Jose!! :D
EliminarHello Maria Jose! This summer i went to a camping with my family.I have met many friends ,i went to the swimmin pool to the beach and i play with my friends. On september 3th i celebrate my mother's birthday with her friends. This is my summer holidays Andrea 5thB
ResponderEliminarNICE ANDREA!!! I THINK CAMPING IS A GREAT PLAN FOR SUMMER HOLIDAYS AND I'M SURE YOU ENJOYED A LOT, LOVE YOUR POST MATE, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
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EliminarThank you Maria Jose
EliminarAndrea 5thB
Hi Maria Jose!!In my summer holidays I went to Cullera,I went to my apartment and I swam in the beach,I went to the swimming pool,I played with my friends...One day I went to the Aquopolis with my friends!It was very nice!This is my summer holidays!!!!
ResponderEliminarBy Alba 6thA <3
YOUR POST IS LOVELY ALBA AND YOUR USE OF PAST TENSE IS PERFECT AS WELL AS YOUR WRITING. THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarThank you Maria Jose!! ^^
EliminarThese summer holidays have been amazing!!!
ResponderEliminarFirst went to Xeraco with my mother and sister for four days,to visit a friend who had rented an apartment with a swimming pool next to the beach.
Then we all went to Madrid to spend the night at my cousins'chalet,it was a lot of fun.
And finally we went to León to spend a whole week with my cousins and my uncles at my cousins grandfather's house and there we met the rest of my cousins'family.
BY VALERIA.S 6THB ❤
BRILLIANT VALERIA!!! GREAT PLANS AND BRILLIANT WIRITING USING PAST SIMPLE TENSE AND A PERFECT AMOUNT OF VOCABULARY, THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarThanks for coment María José
EliminarBy Valeria.S 6thB
Hi Everyone. Summer holidays are FANTASTIC!! This summer i went to Oropesa del Mar,at the beach. Also i go to the swimming pool.I swim in the beach, i eat an icecream,i watch films and series what:Stranger things,one of us is lying,new amsterdam,padre no hay mas que uno... I go to Marina D´or,it´s funny. My cousin wine since Senegal to Spain.
ResponderEliminarThis summer is OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!
By Mai 6thB
YOUR POST IS SO NICE MAI BUT IT WOULD BE PERFECT IF YOU WRITE EVERYTHING IN PAST SIMPLE TENSE. ANYWAY, LOVE YOUR PLANS AND YOUR IDEAS, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello Maria José!!! This summer I went to Barcelona city. I went to visit my grandparents and cousins. We went to the beach two days, also to the pool, and the last days to the mountains. I have a great time. By Martin :)
ResponderEliminarThank you
EliminarThis summer I have been very busy because I have done many soccer tournaments
ResponderEliminarespecially outside of Valencia I have gone to Alicante also to Barcelona to Castellon it was a lot of fun
and this has been my summer
BY ALEJANDRO MINUESA GOMEZ 6THA
Hi Maria Jose!! In my summer holidays. I went to many place. I was in a sport campus. I went to Port Aventure with my cousins,uncles and my parents it was fantastic!! I was also visiting the coves of Javea. It was my first experience diving in the sea. I could see colorful fish thath brushed my face My best holidays!!! BY JOSE AGUADO 6th A
ResponderEliminarThanks you Maria Jose. I'm very happy for your comment. A KISS
EliminarHello Mariajose, I love summer vacations¡¡
ResponderEliminarI like the pool , play soccer in the sand and go out at night with the family. This summer I traveled by boat, it has been fantastic.
On holiday I visit wonderfoul places, I buy souvenirs, I walk along the beach. In summer you enjoy a lot , I love it¡¡¡ BY XIMO NIETO 6th B
THE FIRST PART IS PERFECT XIMO AND THE LAST ONE VERBS WOULD BE BETTER IN PAST SIMPLE TENSE USING VISITED, BOUGHT, WALKED OR ENJOYED AS THEY ARE ACTIONS YOU ENDED UP DURING THE SUMMER. YOUR IDEAS AND PLANS ARE GREAT THOUGH, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
Eliminarhello Mariajose this summer I have gone to Lanzarote with my uncles. The water of the beaches there was very cold but there were many beautiful fish and no matter how cold the water was, it was impossible not to bathe in how crystal clear and beautiful the water was. There also mote in a boat with tobo ganes I had a great time. These are my bacations.claudia 5th A
ResponderEliminarVery good Claudia 😘
EliminarThank you
EliminarLOVE YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS CLAUDIA AS WELL AS YOUR WRITING, NICE IDEAS AND GREAT USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR, I CAN SEE YOU HAVE SOME SUPPORT FROM CARLA:) WELL DONE!!!
Eliminarthanks mariajose
EliminarHello Maria Jose
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays are unforgettable!!!!
In august i went to Tarragona (Pobla de Montornes).In Tarragona i ate ice cream,i swim in the sea, i made routes,i play padelsurf...Late i went to Pyrenees and i visited some places,i did mountaineering,i viseted Cerler and Benasque.
Many weeks later i went to Albal after a long time and i talked to friends,i've had a litlle time to relax after so much routes.
And this are my vacations.
BY Sofia 6A
THANKS FOR THE ATTENTION
by Sofia 6A =)
Hello Maria Jose
EliminarThanks for the coment =D
Now I see that I write my name twice!!!!!
I didn't not realize!!!!
See you tomorrow.
SOFIA 6A
Hello Maria Jose!
ResponderEliminarThe summer holidays are very funny! I went to Cuenca.
I went to the paleontologist museum , are very realist , I recomade you .I went to the river too , the water is very very cold and then I eat sausages , in the bar the sausages and the bread are very big i can't eat all.It was funny.
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GREAT MARIA!!! YOU SAID BIG SAUSAGES!!! OMG!!! I HOPE YOU ENJOYED A LOT, I'M SURE YOU DID!!! LOVE YOUR POST MATE, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!! :)
EliminarHi María José this sumer i don't do a lot of things i went to the pool ,i went to the beach and i went to Mallorca.
ResponderEliminarI help mynsister to reforma a new House .
I eat a lot of delicious food hot dogs , pizzas ,hamburgers.
I had a fantastic summer bye
SO YOU WENT TO MALLORCA TOO....THAT'S SO GREAT, YOUR POST IS SO NICE ALTHOUGH YOU FORGET THE USE OF PAST SIMPLE WHEN WRITING: HELPED, ATE... YOU HAVE A FANTASTIC ENGLISH LEVEL IVAN, USE IT AND CONCENTRATE IN YOUR WRITINGS, YOU NEED TO AVOID SILLY MISTAKES!!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
Eliminarthanks for coment mariajose see yyou next class
EliminarHi María José!! I LOVE summer , this summer I went to an apartament near to te beach.I love the beach but I prefer the pool because on the beach you fill up with sand. I hate when I accidentaly drink salt water.On august 6, I invited some class friends and we had a great time! Byee
ResponderEliminarBy Paula 6thB👍🏼
DRINK SALT WATER??? HAHAHA...LIFE IS HARD PAULA, I'M SURE IT'S NOT BETTER TO DRINK WATER FROM THE POOL!!!! FUNNY POST WITH GREAT IDEAS MATE, LOVE IT!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarThanks Mariajose!! 🫂 :)
EliminarHello Maria Jose, my summer has been incredible and I am going to tell you about it.I went to a chalet with the whole family.Then my parents, my brother and I went to the beach for a week and then another week to the Pyrenees, where we did many routes, saw animals and climbed mountains.We had a great time. Bye Maria Jose. Alex5thA
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT ALEX, YOUR POST AND SUMMER PLANS ARE AMAZING AS IT IS THE WAY YOU WRITE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarThis holidays were fantastic.
ResponderEliminarI went to Navarra for a week and I saw lots of animals: cows,dogs,sheeps......I did hiking in the mountain and I rode a horse.
Another days I swam in the beach and in the swimming pool.
I watched TV, I read a book, I visited lots of places and I went to my cousin's house.
I went to a birthday party with my best friend, and I had dinner and slep there.
I went to a wood with my grandparents, my brother and my cousin.
The holidays were finished but I'm very happy because I return to the school with my friends.
BY:María 6thA
OMG MARIA!!! YOUR WRITINGS ARE UPPER GRADE, THEY ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! THE USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR, THE WAY YOU TELL AND COMMUNICATE IDEAS, EVERYTHING IS AWESOME MATE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarThanks M José!!!!!!!!!
EliminarHi M Jose,
ResponderEliminarI love summer vacations! We went to my great-grandmother' s town, Moral de Calatrava. In the house of my grandparents they have a big pool, I love to bathe with my grandmother, I have also drawn pokémon drawings with little squares. I went to the fair with my cousin and to Camela concert with my parents and cousins. This is my summer vacation! 🏊♂️🌊
GREAT HUGO!! I REALLY LOVE YOUR SUMMER PLANS AND YOUR HOLIDAYS, NICE POST MATE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHi, l'm Ainara and this summer l've gone camping, to the swimming pool and many other things. At the camping, l went to catch crabs and to see the village festivals.
ResponderEliminarBy Ainara 5thB
SHORT BUT NICE AINARA, NEXT TIME TRY TO WRITE SOME MORE IDEAS IN YOUR WRITING BUT THIS ONE IS OK, THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarThanks Maria José, happy weekend.
EliminarHi Mariajose, this holiday I have been to Menorca, Barcelona, the Pyrenees...
ResponderEliminarI have bathed in the beach, swimming pool, I have walked through the mountains...
The most important thing is that I had a great time.
Hello Maria Jose!
ResponderEliminarThis summer, in July, I went to the summer school with some of my classmates.
In August I went to Mallorca by plane. I enjoyed a lot because I did some friends, they were Pepe, Nacho, Jorge and Oliver. At the hotel I swam in the pool and in the beach. I played a tournament of Ping Pong and another of arch.
This holidays were fantastic!!!!!!!
BRILLIANT ARNAU!!! YOUR PLANS ARE AMAZING AND EVERYTHING SOUNDS FUNNY AND ENTERTAINING, I'M SURE YOU ENJOYED A LOT, GREAT POST MATE, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarThanks MARIA JOSE ;D
EliminarHello, Maria Jose, I have really enjoyed this summer. Some friends from London have come and we have shared beautiful moments of sand, sun and beach. Games in the pool. I was given an anime book I love to read.
ResponderEliminarI'm Fernando 5th B
EliminarHello Maria Jose!
ResponderEliminarThis summer vacation I did a lot of things.
I went to visit Barcelona.
From there we took a plane to Romania.
We visited my family and friends, we traveled all over the side.
I went to a theme park in my grandparents village.
I have a great time.
Back in Valencia we visit "Palau de la Reina Sofía."
We went to the beach and pool so many times that I don't remember the exact number.
I like to take a walk or bike ride with my friends and also listen to music and read books.
This was my summer vacation!
By Marcos 6th A
Thanks Maria Jose!!!!
EliminarThanks for supporting me in the post!
Hi, Maria Jose, this holiday I went to my grandma's chalet and I swam in the pool and went to a lot of places. When I came back I went to my grandma's house and then I went to the Xilivella parties and we stayed to sleep.
ResponderEliminarI'm Alex5TB
BRILLIANT ALEX!! GREAT PLANS AND NICE WRITING, HOPE YOU ENJOYED A LOT SUMMER HOLIDAYS, THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose! My vacation went very well, I have been with the family in benidorm and other days in the pool, I have had a great time.
ResponderEliminarI'm Vega 5th B
VERY SHORT AND YOU USE PRESENT PERFECT VEGA, HOW DO YOU KNOW THIS GRAMMAR FORMULA???
EliminarHi!!! In my hollydays I have been in Cullera with my family.
ResponderEliminarI swim in te beach and in the swimming pool.
I do snorkel with my mum, becouse in Faro Cullera there are a beautiful coves in the sea.
I do paddle surf too.
We go to walk around the mountain and we see the stars in the night.
My best friend Sofia sleep in my flat and we enjoy very much together. .
I love all of Cullera.
It's my favourite place.
By Marta Lucas 5thB
Hi !!! Maria Jose I're had a great time this summer. I went to Benidorm for a few days. Then throughout the month of August ,i went one day to Peñiscola whit my family. Another day we went to Xativa to the fair and i rode on a lot of attractions.I' re been to my grandmother's chalet a lot and that of my undes and in has given a lot in the pool .I went to the river Juanes whit my parents,finally to repeat.By : Judith 5th B.
ResponderEliminarHello, I'm Marcos. My vacations have been great. I went to Andorra with my parents. And i have enjoyed nature and food. I have also gone to a cliff in Campello. Fabulous!! I have been in Benissa and i bathedin a beautiful pool. I have also played with my friends.
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ResponderEliminarHi Maria Jose.
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays have been fantastic!
In July I went to a camping with my cousin in France. After we went to the Pyrenees.
In August I went to the beach with my parents I played voleyball, swam in the sea and make some castles.
In September I went to Marina d'or with my mother and my grandmother, I went to theme park and I went to water park.
This was my vacations.
By Emma 6thA
Hi Maria Jose!!! In this summer holidays I enjoyed four places. First, my family and I were in Denia. There I had a great time: I bathed in one of the best beaches I had been to, I played in the pool of my apartament with my brother and my friend Francisco and I ate delicious rice. Later, in my grandmother's town in Cuenca, I was able to rest, be with my family and friends and play sports such as: swimming, cycling, football, table tennis... In the middle of August, I went to Madrid where one of my dreams came true, to see the Santiago Bernabeu stadium. I also went to see the Lion King Musical which was fantastic and to the amusement park. Finally, I was in Oropesa there I did a lot of things like going to the shell's beach, going to the Polinesia Water Park, going to see the Marina d'Or's musical... I have enjoyed a fantastic summer! By Adrian 6thB.
ResponderEliminarOMG!!!! OMG!!! OMG!!! LOVE IT!!! IDEAS, PLANS, PERFECT WRITING FOLLOWING A FANTASTIC ORDER WHEN COMMUNICATING YOUR HOLIDAYS ACTIVITIES. IT'S SO AMAZING MATE!!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarOk Maria Jose
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ResponderEliminarHi MJose!, Summer holidays i like me! i like traveling places new and try food and much more ice cream.
On holiday I have a time relax, I visit monuments,I go to restaurants,I swim in the swimming pool and in the beach go to walk with my family.
I like to listen to music and play with my sister in the afternoons.
we can always sleep later because we don't have to get up early.
summer is fantastic! By Francisco 6th B
GREAT FRAN!!! I LOVE YOUR COMMENT SPECIALLY THE END WHEN YOU SAY YOU DON'T HAVE TO GET UP EARLY!!! HAHA...YOUR POST IS SO NICE MATE!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarOk MARIA jose
EliminarNICE POST CARLA AND GREAT IDEAS, I'M SO HAPPY READING YOU REALLY ENJOY SUMMER HOLIDAYS, HOPE YOU ALSO ENJOY THIS SCHOOL COURSE, WELL DONE!!!
ResponderEliminarHello, my vacations have been very fun; I have spent days with my family and friends. I have gone to the beach, to the pool I have seen new places. I really like summer.
ResponderEliminarHugo Oliva 5thB
Hi ,Mjose . My summer holiday it was fantastic I goes to Pirineos to the Camping aneto, with my family .I goes to lot of places and I ate a lot of ice cream and lots of new food.And in Benasque I ate a lots of olives its delicious.But no only im stay in lots of restaurants and bars I goes to de mountanys c an example is the IBON DE PLAN/EL PICO ESTOS /EL SALVAGUARDIAS... an more more more ruts .MY HOLIDAYS IT WAS FANTASTIC
ResponderEliminarBY:GALA 6thA
YOUR POST IS BRILLIANT GALA BUT HOW DO YOU WRITE GOES???? OMG!!!! GO IS WENT IN PAST SIMPLE!!!!!!! THIS IS A HUGE MISTAKE YOU CAN'T REPEAT, TRY TO STUDY ALL THE FORMULAS IN PAST SIMPLE PLEASE, THE REST IS FANTASTIC, WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello Maria José in my summer i go to Alcossebre .In Alcossebre i go to beach ,swimming pool and restaurants.later i go to Cullera With Marta and Marcos .by Sofía 5thB
ResponderEliminarGOOD SOFIA ALTHOUGH YOUR POST IS SHORT AND YOU DON'T TELL ME MANY PLANS THIS SUMMER. NEXT TIME TRY TO EXPLAIN MORE THINGS SO I CAN'T EVALUATE YOU PROPERLY WITH SUCH A FEW INFORMATION!!!
EliminarHello María José,* sumer. I have traveled by autocaravane througu the nort of spain. I have visited Soria and Teruel,some museums, restaurants and monuments .The sumer is very very good.
ResponderEliminarBye Ariadna Calpe 5thA😀❤️
HI ARIADNA, YOUR POST IS OK, IT'S SHORT AND YOU USE ONE FORMULA THAT IT ISN'T EXPLAINED IN THE CLASS. USE THE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR YOU KNOW IN YOUR WRITINGS AND MAKE A GREAT EFFORT TO GET GOOD MARKS. YOU HAVE TO IMPROVE IT!!!
Eliminarokay 🌞👩🏼🚀🧑⚖️🐱🧮⛓️
ResponderEliminarhello my name is vincent and boy to tell my holidays because I have to put the post: this summer I have gone to the center of Seville, to an old museum on a ground floor then arrives completely had a viewpoint that at night is illuminated with very nice lights but surprise we went directly to portugal :O in portugal there was a giant hotell because instead of rooms had houses but when we left things we realized that had a basement with a garden and when we went to the center of town there were many lights, bazaars, bars ... and the next day we went to the beach of the Atlantic Sea and the water was icy🍦 and my father got me or couldn't stand with his feet and then we went home and it was over :( by vincent 6/A :D
ResponderEliminarYOUR POST IS AMAZING VINCENT, I HAVE SOME DOUBTS IF YOU USE A LOT THE TRANSLATOR BUT THE IDEAS AND PLANS ARE PERFECT, YOU WILL TELL ME IN THE CLASS IF YOU WRITE THIS POST ON YOUR OWN AS IT SEEMS SO GOOD. THANKS MATE!!!
EliminarHello María José,this summer I have had a great time,I have been to visit several towns:Cullera, Villafames,Calpe, Benidorm and some more,they are very beautiful towns.The rest of the summer days I have spent in muy chalet in Montserrat.It has been a fantastic summer.
ResponderEliminarBy Sergio 5thB
YOUR POST IS OK SERGIO BUT YOU USE THE TRANSLATOR TO WRITE THE TEXT USING PRESENT PERFECT INSTEAD OF YOUR OWN WORDS. TRY TO WRITE WITHOUT TOO MUCH HELP!!!!
EliminarHello María José!! In my summer holidays I went to Benissa beach, its water is transparent. I went to Tavernes de Valldigna with my grandparents, I ate ice cream, I read a book. I went to Oropesa del Mar with my family, I played tennis, I swam in the swimming pool, I went to walk the routers, I climbed the mountains. Ones day I went Aquarama, its water slides are amazing. I has a crear time.
ResponderEliminarBRILLIANT MARIO, LOVE YOUR POST, YOUR PLANS AND THE WAY YOU WRITE IN THE PAST SIMPLE FORM, AS YOU LEARNED WITH ME THE LAST YEAR, FANTASTIC MATE!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHere are my post (sorry for the late):
ResponderEliminarMy vacations are very fun! I go to the Grandpa and Grandma house, I go to the beach, I go at the house to my lil cousin and y play to she conñuter games! So fun! To finish i go to the camping whit my mom.
nira.
Thanks Maria José ☺️
EliminarComputer games* sorry, my traductor are bad 🤣
ResponderEliminarThese are my holidays.I go to a camping in France and a camping on Pais Vasco.I love campings. I go to the restaurant of Karlos Arguiñano on Zarautz.Also I go to the beach on Perello with my friend Pau.I like very much summer because I like the swimming pool.
ResponderEliminarANGEL5THA
BRILLIANT ANGEL, YOUR PLANS THIS SUMMER ARE EXPLAINED USING YOUR OWN WORDS AND THE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR LEARNED IN CLASS, SO THANKS FOR GREAT EFFORT MATE!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello María José this summer I have had a great time. I went to the beach of Albir (Alicante) for a week. Every day we went to the beach and then to the pool. When we came back we went to Asturias for a week. The journey was endless. And once there we did the Caire route, a climb to a town called Bulnes and canoeing down the Sella River. I had a great time. When we came back I went to my grandparents' house and I stayed there for the other 3 weeks.
ResponderEliminarBy Celia 6th B
BRILLIANT CELIA!! YOUR POST IS GREAT WITH NICE PLANS DESCRIPTIONS USING APPROPRIATE GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY, WELL DONE MATE!!
EliminarThank you María José
EliminarYOUR POST IS NICE MARIO BUT YOU USE PRESENT PERFECT AND YOU DON'T KNOW THIS FORMULA YET. WHY DON'T YOU USE PAST SIMPLE INSTEAD OF USING THE TRANSLATOR??? IT¡S IMPOSSIBLE YOU CONTROL THIS TENSE AS I DIDN'T EXPLAIN IT THE LAST COURSE. NEXT TIME TRY TO DO YOUR WRITINGS ON YOUR OWN WITHOUT THE TRANSLATOR, JUST IN CASE FOR ISOLATED WORDS BUT NEVER TO FIND OUT WHOLE SENTENCES!!!
ResponderEliminarYOUR POST IS NICE JORGE BUT IT'S WRITEN WITH THE TRANSLATOR, IT'S IMPOSSIBLE YOU CAN DO A WRITING USING THE PRESENT PERFECT. TRY TO WRITE WITH YOUR OWN WORDS AND USING THE ENGLISH YOU KNOW. NO TRANSLATOR PLEASE!!!
ResponderEliminarSORRY!!! I'VE SAID MARIO INSTEAD OF AIMAR!!!! :(
ResponderEliminarHello Maria Jose my name is josep5thB this summer I have a dinner with my friends on my chalet¡Is very cool! Also I go to the beach with Cesar and Claudia my friends in my chalet and I go to the mountain " la muela" the mountain Biggest in my chalet and I I haven't done anything else
ResponderEliminarBy josep5thB
NICE POST JOSEP BUT YOU WRITE IN PRESENT SIMPLE WHEN YOU KNOW THE PAST SIMPLE TENSE. TRY TO ADAPT YOUR WRITINGS ACCORDING TO YOUR ENGLISH LEVEL!!! DO YOUR BEST NEXT TIME AND SHOW ME THAT YOU REALLY CONTROL ENGLISH WHEN WRITING!!!
EliminarHello MªJose!!! This summer I went to Morella at the weekend. There were many things and a lot of shops. And went on the route to the castle of Morella, there were many eagles on the castle.
ResponderEliminarAnother week we went to Xeraco beach for a few days.I went to the pool many times.I had a great time this summer.
By Daniela 6thB.
LOVE YOUR POST DANIELA!!! AND YOUR PLANS DURING THE SUMMER!! YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD USING THE APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! WELL DONE!! :)
EliminarThanks you!!
Eliminarhello Maria Jose
ResponderEliminarThis summeri went to a monserrat .
I have been to my gramma 's house.
there i have been my cousings and ie have gone to see the toy paraets i bouoght a necklace.
Then we got to the parck tnere are bars.
Then so well we were in my Grandparents'chalet
and we bathed in the pool.
Bye nadia 6A
NICE POST NADIA BUT YOU USE PRESENT PERFECT INSTEAD OF GRAMMAR FORMULAS YOU ALREADY KNOW, TRY TO EXPLAIN YOUR IDEAS ON YOUR OWN!!!PLANS ARE GREAT, THANKS FOR COMMENT MATE!!!
EliminarTHANKS
Eliminarhello :)
ResponderEliminarHi Maria Jose,
ResponderEliminarIn my summer holiday, I went all summer in the beach in Perello, I have an apartament near the beach.
By the morning I went all time in the sea with my friends, they are very funny, also I went to Cullera to snorkel I could see a lot of fishes.
By the afternoon I played to football and by the night sometimes I went to dinner with my family.
Really my summer went very funny
By Eric 6TH A
LOVE YOUR POST ERIC!!! AND YOUR PLANS DURING THE SUMMER!! YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD USING THE APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! WELL DONE!! :)
EliminarHello M.Jose this summer I have done things.
ResponderEliminarI`m went to my grandma`s house ,I`m went to the beach and the pool and I`m went to my village/town and I was at home too much.I ate,slept,woke up,had a great time and got up too early. I got up at 4:00 or 6:00. It was fantastic.
RUBEN 6B
AMAZING RUBEN!!! YOUR WRITING AND THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE YOUR IDEAS IS GREAT AND AWESOME. I LOVE YOUR PLANS AND YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS MATE!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarTanks you mj
EliminarHi Maria Jose!!!!!!! In my summer holidays I went to Pouet , I went to apartament , I swam in the beach, in the swimmingpool,I played the flut, I read books... One day I went with the paddlesurf with my cousins. It was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ResponderEliminarThis is my summer holidays!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BY: TERESA 6THA :)
BRILLIANT TERESA!! LOVE YOUR PLANS AND YOUR WRITING!! SHORT BUT INTENSE!!! I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE BUT TRY TO WRITE SOME MORE IDEAS NEXT TIME FOR A PROPERLY EVALUATION!!!
EliminarHi MªJose,
ResponderEliminarIn my summer holidays I went to the beach, It was very funny.
I was in Denia. At the morning always I went to the beach or doing snorkel. After the lunch I went to the apartament swimming pool with my friends. In the evening usually I went to shopping and walk in the city with my family. At the nigth I sometimes went to dinner to a restaurant. It was great!!!
BRILLIANT LUCAS!!! THE WRITING IS PERFECT AS IT IS THE USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR. LOVE YOUR PLANS AND THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE IDEAS, WELL DONE!!
EliminarSummer is great!!
ResponderEliminarI spend it in the chalet with my grandparents in the pool all day and I played with my friends on the console.
I travel with my parents every year to a different place and we visit places and eat in restaurants.
I love traveling!!!
this is my summer.
By Amador Navarro 6b
NICE POST AND NICE IDEAS AMADOR BUT TRY TO ADAPT YOUR WRITING TO THE CONTEXT. YOU KNOW THE PAST SIMPLE TENSE AND YOU CAN COMMUNICATE USING IT!!! PLANS ARE NICE BUT YOU CAN DO IT BETTER!!!
EliminarHello MªJosé! I like summer holidays because I have time to play with my friends, go to the beach and I can get up late.
ResponderEliminarThis summer holidays I went to my grandparent's xalet in the mountains. I ridden a bike every day. I play tennis with my father. I swam in the swimming pool. I met whit my family and I hicking on the mountains.
I love summer holidays! Are fantastic!
VERY NICE POST IZAN!!! I'M SURE YOU REALLY ENJOY YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS!!! GREAT USE OF PAST FORMULAS AND VOCABULARY!!! THERE ARE SOME MISTAKES BUT THE WRITING IN GENERAL IS SO GOOD!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
EliminarHello María José! in my holidays im go to the suiming pool and the beach and i go a town and i go to Cádiz in the palmar and i go to the party un Albacete bye bye :)
ResponderEliminarSummer holidays are fantastic .
ResponderEliminarIn july I went to the summer school. I was with my friends in the swimming pool,in the park...
In august we went to the apartament in Moncofa with my family,we went to the beach and i played with my friends and cousins, then we went to a camping in Benidorm.
I love the holidays
By Javier Tomas 5B :)
AMAZING JAVIER!!! YOUR WRITING AND THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE YOUR IDEAS IS GREAT AND AWESOME. I LOVE YOUR PLANS AND YOUR SUMMER HOLIDAYS MATE!! WELL DONE!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose!! The summer holidays are very funny! this summer I went to a camping near to the beach I swimin in the pool and the beach I played with my friend and with my cousins
ResponderEliminarBye Lucia 6th A
NICE LUCIA BUT YOU HAVE TO IMPROVE YOUR WRITING!!! YOU HAVE MORE VOCABULARY AND YOU HAVE TO USE IT, AS WELL AS GRAMMAR FORMULAS IN PAST SIMPLE TENSE TO COMMUNICATE ACTIONS OR PLANS ALREADY FINISHED!!! MAKE THE EFFORT NEXT TIME!!!
EliminarHello Maria Jose!! The summer holidays are very funny! this summer I go to the swimming pool, and i go to the beach, to my grandparents chalet 3 days
ResponderEliminarBYE!! Aroa 5A
NICE POST AROA BUT TOO SHORT, NEXT TIME TRY TO DO YOUR BEST AND MAKE AND EFFORT TO WRITE SOME MORE IDEAS. I CAN'T EVALUATE PROPERLY ONE WRITING WITH SUCH A FEW INFORMATION!!!
EliminarThanks M.José!!!!
Eliminarhello mariajose in the LW ay a tab that we have not given
ResponderEliminarclaudia 5thA
Hello Maria Jose.
ResponderEliminarThis summer was fantasic. I went to a hotel, a lot of beaches and at my best friends' village.I ate a lot of pizza and burgers, they were delicious. At the pool of the building where was staying my best friend I swimmed a lot and had so much fun.
By Valeria Granella 6thB
YOUR POST IS NICE VALERIA BUT I'M SURE YOU CAN IMPROVE YOUR WRITING USING MORE VOCABULARY AND TAKING INTO ACCOUNT GRAMMAR ACCURACY. YOU HAVE SOME MISTAKES YOU HAVE TO AVOID!!! ANYWAY, I LOVE YOUR PLANS DURING THE SUMMER!!!
EliminarHi M.José!
ResponderEliminarThis is my post of the my holidays.
This summer was very funny, I was do much things....por exemple....were travel a Fuerteventura with my family, celebration my 10 birthday, we were goes the beach, we were swim in the swimming pool and visit island.
Its very interesant and I like much island Fuerteventura.
In the summer too visit my family from Seville.
I love summer and holidays.
Best regards.
Gonzalo.
YOUR POST IS VERY ORIGINAL GONZALO AND YOU WRITE USING YOUR OWN WORDS!!! YOU HAVE SOME MISTAKES I LOVE THE WAY YOU COMMUNICATE YOUR IDEAS THINKING IN ENGLISH!! WELL DONE MATE!!!
EliminarThanks M. José!
EliminarHi Maria Jose!!Im Sara for 5B my holiday its was fantastic.Im go to the countryside.I like farm animals,the cow,the pigs ,the sheeps...I love
ResponderEliminarcountryside and go to the pool.
NICE SARA BUT I HOPE SOME MORE FOR THE NEXT WRITING...THIS ONE IS WRITEN IN A VERY SIMPLE WAY AND I'M SURE YOU CAN IMPROVE YOUR COMPOSITIONS USING MORE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS ALREADY LEARNED IN CLASS!!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!!!
Eliminartanks maria jose
EliminarHi MªJose !Im Daniella 6ªA my summer holidays are fantastic!!!!
ResponderEliminarI like the swimming pool,the beach , traveling around of Mexico , visit interesing creeks ...
On holidays ,I have a very good time! I travelling to the Mexico , I listen to music , I talk to friends , I visit diferent beaches , I go to the restaurants , I read books , I swimming in the swimming pool and I go eating mexican food . I´great fun!!!!!!!!!!!! This is my summer holidays. bye
YOUR POST IS OK DANIELLA BUT I'M SURE YOU CAN IMPROVE YOUR WRITING ACCORDING TO YOUR ENGLISH LEVEL. YOU USE PRESENT TENSE WHEN YOU LEARNED PAST SIMPLE THE LAST YEAR. IT'S TIME TO APPLY WHAT YOU'VE LEARNED!!!!
EliminarThanks you MªJose!
Eliminarsonia matas ortega
ResponderEliminarthis summer i went on vacation to alicante,i had a gread time with my fammily
OK SONIA, BUT TRY TO MAKE A GREAT EFFORT NEXT TIME AS YOUR WRITING IS VERY SHORT AND I CAN EVALUATE PROPERLY YOUR POST WITH JUST A FEW INFORMATION!!!
EliminarIker Blasco Escrihuela
ResponderEliminarThis summer I travelling to the Tenerife whit my father, I visit Teide its ver beautiful I have a nice summer.
BYE!!
NICE POST IKER BUT TOO SHORT, NEXT TIME TRY TO DO YOUR BEST AND MAKE AND EFFORT TO WRITE SOME MORE IDEAS. I CAN'T EVALUATE PROPERLY ONE WRITING WITH SUCH A FEW INFORMATION!!!
EliminarBRILLIANT SANDRA!! I REALLY LIKE YOUR WRITING COMPOSITION WITH GREAT IDEAS AND A PERFECT WAY TO COMMUNICATE IN AN ORIGINAL WAY!!! THE USE OF VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR IS AWESOME!! WELL DONE!!!
ResponderEliminarLOVE YOUR POST MARIA!!! AND YOUR PLANS DURING THE SUMMER!! YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD USING THE APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR FORMULAS!!! THANKS FOR COMMENT!! WELL DONE!! :)
ResponderEliminarThanks😻💖
ResponderEliminarThank you!!😻
ResponderEliminarOk Mª Jose
ResponderEliminarITS VERY FUNNY
ResponderEliminarI have have a good vacations in this summer. I have been whit my mothrr in some cabins and there were many animals. I have been with my father in the town and muy cousins, uncles and grandparents.
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